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Shine

See him shine as he dances to the music beat. Confident, pushing the limit, rhythmic energy. Wings on his shoes as he erupts in the air. Hips sway, his arms fly on a fine ocean wave. Down and up, left, right, down and up, a master Chased by the fleeing clouds and laid by the wind. 4/11/2021 Poetry Contest: Writing Prompt - Shine - Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/22/2021 4:08:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this wonderful free verse poem, well done, love _Constance
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Date: 4/21/2021 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful dancing write. I can hear the music. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 4/16/2021 1:35:00 PM
Nice, fast paced rhythmic poem! All the best in the contest, Eve. BW Krish
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Date: 4/15/2021 2:13:00 AM
Such a nice image ...
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Date: 4/11/2021 11:11:00 AM
This is a lovely poem
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Date: 4/11/2021 10:01:00 AM
Loved the dance of life. Best for the contest.
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