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She nonchalantly slipped out of the bar hightailing it in a furtive manner. Yet, anxiety stopped her not too far where she vomited behind an old banner. Her new husband, a strict Ascetic Jew thought he saw a glimpse of her and stormed in. And ducking out, seemed the right thing to do, before he caught her indulging in sin. After a deep dive in a shallow pool the adrenaline left her heart reeling. For he’d trailed her, he was nobody's fool and his guile gave her a queasy feeling. She didn’t deny, she took him to bed and convinced him...she’s a good girl, instead. Written Feb.08, 2018

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Date: 2/19/2018 4:00:00 PM
Terrific!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/6/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2018 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful placement in the contest, Emile, with your beautiful sonnet. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/6/2018 10:01:00 AM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2018 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Emile,great write . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2018 3:51:00 PM
Thanks ever so much Eve, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2018 2:40:00 PM
Back with congrats, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2018 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/12/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thanks for your entry Emile, congrats on placing in my contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/12/2018 12:59:00 PM
Thanks John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/8/2018 10:12:00 PM
Quite the intriguing scenario, Emile. Very well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/9/2018 8:42:00 AM
Thanks Line, once more I am in your debt my friend, Emile.

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