She Was Returned

It has been many years since his daughter was lost
If he could bring her back he would at all costs
Ever since that day he has wandered and roamed
Turned his back on his family and their loving home

His life on the road left him disheveled and broke
When he thinks back to the past it leaves him in choke
Another day on his lonesome travels
A stranger he meets and their discussions unravel

This old man he has met all mysterious and dark
Told him of times going back as far as the Ark
Tales of the Templar's and Merlin the Magician
After hearing the mans story he began to begin

       "I lost my daughter a number of years ago
        She drowned whilst on holiday under a still water flow
        I couldn't comprehend the loss of her life
        The pressure of living, I left my home and my wife"

   "What would you do if your girl could be returned
    Have you ever wondered if fate could be unearned
    If this was possible, would you offer your life
    For your daughter to return to her mother your wife"

   "Remember, many years have passed her death by
    For her past to be relived, there is a reply
    Knights of the ages will descend from their dark
    They will then strike you down, as you begin your embark"
  
       "My life I have not lived for many a year
        For me to lose mine, I gladly volunteer
        I will die happy for all eternity
        Knowing my daughter will grow old, as it should be"

The old man chants a script of the past
Of an ancient time when fate was cast
The power of they to be able to reverse
To balance their return, they have to reimburse

   "Midnight skies will turn to purple cobalt blues
    Six Templar Knights will stand and surround you
    At your request they will strike you down
    On the sixth stroke, you will face your death gown"

   "A light will appear of which you'll travel through
    But before you do, a young girl runs to you
    Your daughter, in pink and red will run from the light
    She'll run through your soul, as your sleep starts tonight"

The old mysterious man continues on his way
As he passes a house on a hot Summers day
In the garden there sits, a daughter and mother
Discussing the loss of her father, as they begin to recover

She tells of the day whilst on holiday years ago
My husband your father, lost under a still water flow
As we comprehend the loss of his life
Leaving behind his daughter and wife




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/16/2015 7:18:00 PM
This is for me the best I have read so far. Outstanding piece, Congratulations. A big 7 as well.
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James Fraser
Date: 7/17/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Richard. When my mind wanders, story poems are what I enjoy writing the most. Need to get this mind of mine wandering again. Blessed weekend to you, James :)
Date: 7/15/2015 4:20:00 PM
Sad yet...beautiful story, James. It reminds me of one I wrote some time back on the soup...'Carolyn'. Great writing my friend, Elaine
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Date: 7/17/2015 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Elaine, I'd be delighted to read 'Carolyn' next. Wishing you a most lovely weekend, hugs//James xx
Date: 7/14/2015 10:28:00 AM
Such a heartfelt poem with a wonderful ending. Congratulations on your win in Carol Eastman “Story Poem Contest” Hugs Eve
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James Fraser
Date: 7/14/2015 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Eve, I so enjoyed writing this little story, hugs//Eve, James :)
Date: 7/14/2015 2:03:00 AM
Hi James, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~
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Date: 7/14/2015 12:28:00 PM
Many thanks Linda, much appreciated, James :)
Date: 7/14/2015 12:17:00 AM
James, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT
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James Fraser
Date: 7/14/2015 12:48:00 PM
Thank you SKAT, I'm smiling, James :) :)
Date: 7/13/2015 1:58:00 PM
such a powerful write James brought tears to my eyes congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 7/14/2015 12:59:00 PM
Many thanks Jan, it's a story poem I so liked writing, hugs//James :)xx
Date: 6/27/2014 7:38:00 AM
Beautiful one.. :) well done on the win
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Date: 6/28/2014 4:48:00 PM
Thanks kindly Sasha, it was koolio to write, James :)
Date: 6/26/2014 7:28:00 PM
Excellent story and write James....you captured the power of love magnificently. Big congrats on a fine win!
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James Fraser
Date: 6/28/2014 4:10:00 PM
Thanks Cecilia, it was a joy to write, James :)
Date: 6/26/2014 9:43:00 AM
Very sad and heart felt story. Congrats on the win,
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James Fraser
Date: 6/26/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Dr. Ram - much appreciated, James :)
Date: 6/25/2014 5:47:00 PM
Oh my goodness my friend you have brought tears to my eyes, what a story! wow. Well done, and grats on your win ;)
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Date: 6/26/2014 2:46:00 PM
Casarah, I so loved writing this piece. Thank you for your kind words, James :)
Date: 6/25/2014 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win for a wonderful, extremely powerful write. BRAVO!
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Date: 6/25/2014 2:28:00 PM
James, congrats on a great win with this extraordinary story!! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/25/2014 1:33:00 PM
my prince of the highlands, great storyteller you are!.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
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James Fraser
Date: 6/25/2014 2:05:00 PM
I so love writing little stories in poetry fashion, and I need to get the brain cells kicking again to keep writing more. Thank you so much for your kind words 'Princess Nette' hugs back xx
Date: 6/17/2013 4:43:00 PM
Truly a well written Epic Fantasy. Your win is no surprise... Congratulations... Jake
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Date: 6/17/2013 12:01:00 PM
Nice to see you here James, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ thank you for taking your time and entering my contest. Luv* SKAT
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations James on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:44:00 PM
congratulations on your big win in Nikko's contest, James. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/10/2010 3:17:00 PM
congrats james :D
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:35:00 PM
A well deserved win, Congrats, James
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Date: 8/7/2010 11:59:00 AM
Congrats James on your big win in Twist and Shock contest with this exceptional write.. enjoy anothere sweet momentous victory with luv..
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Date: 8/7/2010 10:19:00 AM
Hi James, big congratulations on your 2nd place win with this touching, supernatural tale. Hauntingly beautiful, well done ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:26:00 AM
LVery riveting James. Congratulations on your 2nd. Love, joyce
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:19:00 AM
Very sad that this does happen in life. It does help to give us the emotional core that we need to write and share with others the meanings of our lives. Congrats on the win. Dan C
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:16:00 AM
Super congrats James for your 2nd place win with this haunting piece! This just gripped me! A sad write that was just wonderfully written! -- nikko :)
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:56:00 AM
sorry James this one just brought me undone... incredibly sad piece i can only think of Brava love Jayne
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