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The visitors arrive and I must bear Their comments are not that I really care. I stare at them as they would stare at me; Until they break the ice, act so beastly. Listen to their litany of abuse, "Look well, her eyes are closed, having a snooze?" "Isn't this an invert of a known painting?" "Nice auburn hair though she looks like fainting." "Not as good as Mona, now that's a dear." I cannot understand why they come here. They dare compare me to that wanton lass How many men know she was sick, alas? Finally, they leave except for one man. I know that I can return his love for me. If it were in my power down I'd come Leave this mural, on his lips and kiss him some. The painter draws our love and endeavour, Happy; we'll be each other forever.

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Date: 8/12/2024 10:02:00 PM
Dear Victor I'm late to the party with this, I have been quite busy lately, however I can see why this beautiful poem got awarded PTD, it deserves the accolades. Congratulations. Hugs
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Date: 8/11/2024 5:57:00 PM
Contemporaneous breath strokes as a quill doubles for its POTD mentor, prosit Victor. Aloha William
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Date: 8/9/2024 7:45:00 AM
Wonderful, Victory. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/8/2024 6:30:00 PM
' The painter draws our love. ' I can feel the longing within, as I look at this picture. She's lingering in deep thought, simply waiting to be held. This is tender and emotional, all at the same time. Congratulations Victor, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 8/8/2024 5:49:00 PM
Great write, my friend. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/8/2024 4:01:00 PM
Victor, wonderful, congratulations on POTD. -hugs
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Date: 8/8/2024 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Painters paint with paint. Writes paint with words. You have painted a wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Date: 8/8/2024 8:07:00 AM
Hello Victor, First of all congratulations on POTD!!! I love your voice in the painting, which brings feelings once idle to life. Plus the contrast between superficial judgments and the deeper, often unspoken, desires for love and connection. A wonderful read!! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 8/8/2024 7:47:00 AM
A visual search of the lovely painting "Lonely Girl" by Jacky Gerritsen. It helps to see whose perspective it is. "Their litany of abuse" how original. I found humor then love Victor. I really enjoyed your humor in this one. Congratulations on your POTD! ~xo
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Date: 8/8/2024 6:59:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD dear victor. Well deserved
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Date: 8/8/2024 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Victor, Very nicely done
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Date: 8/8/2024 6:24:00 AM
Enjoy your day in the sun Vic
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Date: 8/8/2024 5:50:00 AM
This poem I missed ! This is a wonderful personification of a painting ! Great imagination. Your topics are so diverse. The relation between the painter and the painting is so deep as between two lovers. Great poem. Congratulations dear Victor on your well deserved POTD.
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Date: 8/8/2024 5:32:00 AM
If I was a painting I’d peel myself off the canvas to kiss the lips of such a talented poet. Beautifully penned. Congratulations on POTD dear vb! xomo
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/8/2024 8:13:00 AM
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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 8/8/2024 5:53:00 AM
You can kiss me anytime you like, sweetheart.
Date: 8/8/2024 5:22:00 AM
brilliant bit of personification Victor...art critics from the "painting's" perspective. Nicely done and very unique...
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Date: 8/8/2024 4:25:00 AM
Dropping back with many congrats on POTD Victor xx
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Date: 8/8/2024 3:56:00 AM
Victor, your Personification makes for such interesting reading and is so well done, no wonder it is POTD! Enjoy your day!!
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Date: 8/8/2024 3:17:00 AM
Dear Victor, I enjoyed your interesting perspective, of the thoughts of the classic Mona Lisa. A hearty congratulations on this creative piece. Have a blessed day..
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Nancy Kaufman
Date: 8/8/2024 3:18:00 AM
oops..obviously not Mona. Please educate me on the famous painting..thanks
Date: 8/8/2024 2:41:00 AM
Your poem has received the honor. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 8/8/2024 2:38:00 AM
An excellent poem as told from the woman in the painting. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day Victor… Beryl
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Date: 8/8/2024 2:23:00 AM
Unique and so imaginative, exquisitely penned, Victor. You’ve lined up quite a few POTD honours now, fantastic!
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Date: 8/8/2024 1:49:00 AM
What a very imaginative and inspiring poem, Victor. A big Congratulations on a much deserved POTD. Enjoy your special poetry day. All the best to you. ~
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Date: 8/8/2024 12:41:00 AM
I suppose men can fall in love with an image as they are so visual. Great personification Victor! And congratulations on your potd honor!
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Date: 8/8/2024 12:39:00 AM
Beautifully done. Very original my friend. I really enjoyed it. Many Congratulations on today's POTD. Have a great awarded day!.
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Date: 8/8/2024 12:31:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Victor on the honour of POTD. Tom
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