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She, of the Onyx Crown

Beauty of yours, informed by moon's illume, Irises lilac, heaven sent thee here, Adducing stock's spiced vanilla perfume, My heart all consumed, I must have your ear. Oh, creature of mourn, what love are thee? Raven hair, for it appears, has no death, Your words whisper of winds long lost at sea, Darkness doth command with a single breath. Blinded, such you have obscured every star, I am yours, now the only eyes required, She of the onyx crown, goddess you are, I, your nocturnal animal... Inspired. Do you salvate all sin within your sight? Let us sing, and submit to Nyx's night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 12/3/2023 1:22:00 AM
This is such an impeccable sonnet with shimmering hues of dark fantasy vibes and intriguing aura! I love your enchanting wordplay too here especially "Irises lilac, heaven sent thee here", " Informed by moon's illume", "Your words whisper of winds long lost at sea" Wow.. A spellbinding piece with elegant poetic richness!
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Kate Davies
Date: 12/3/2023 4:47:00 AM
Wow thank you for such great feedback! It is very much appreciated, I adore sonnets x
Date: 12/2/2023 2:38:00 AM
Oh, quite like the mythical. Feels like the Grey lady walking through time.
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Kate Davies
Date: 12/3/2023 4:46:00 AM
Glad you liked it Paul
Date: 12/2/2023 2:38:00 AM
Melodic and uniquely beautiful. Great job!
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Kate Davies
Date: 12/3/2023 4:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely feedback

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