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She Loves Me, She Loves

I love,I loved my sweetheart's beauty,fair Nightly,my passionate heart did declare, Dazzled by smiling eyes,I was possessed Inside,unchecked,a raging fire,obsessed; Such anguish in me,she did arouse Her words of rejection,my ardour doused, Images burned and time would not erase Upon her sweet face,I still longed to gaze: Crushed on emotion's merry-go-round Into depths of despair,my hopes were ground, Until destiny's dance began to play A chance encounter fêted me that day. We cuddled,kissed and kissed again To our signature ,love refrain. Brian Strand The Secondhand Emotion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/17/2012 10:37:00 AM
Very romantic, love it, Congratulations on your win. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations Brian on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:33:00 PM
Good write, and congratulations on receiving honorable mention with this entry.
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:12:00 PM
Congrats, Brian. Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 6:58:00 PM
thick with first and second hand emotion..on the merry go round.... congratulations to you Brian
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Date: 1/16/2012 3:08:00 PM
Sometimes the yo-yo motion of emotion is just too much! and friendship is a safer course, Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/14/2010 2:07:00 PM
This reads like a work of old and that's to your credit. I like this. You are versatile and adept. I cleaned up my entry to your latest contest. I hope you don't mind. Tell me what you think as I value your opinion. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 1/14/2010 4:31:00 AM
Beautiful love write. We're all swooning. Keep the creative pen flowing with love's emotion. Sara
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful! Beautiful! sonnet, Brian. One day - I shall right one like this - I hope. Lainie
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Date: 1/13/2010 1:21:00 PM
Oh my....now romantic, this is!!! Feels like a sonnet from a book of old!! Loved this, Brian.. a wonderful sonnet for the contest.~ love, Carrie
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Date: 1/13/2010 12:59:00 PM
Nothing like a great love sonnet, Brian. (small typo line 8). Thanks for your congrats. It was a welcome surprise! Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2010 12:31:00 PM
Beautiful writing Brian. If this is for the contest it ought to do very well, if not, you should enter it!! Love Light Patty
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Date: 1/13/2010 11:45:00 AM
This is very good, I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:46:00 AM
Wow, this is a nice change of pace for you, Brian. I love the line about being "Crushed on emotion's merry-go-round." It's hard to "douse" the flames. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2010 8:07:00 AM
romantic poem, enjoyed reading today
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