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She Laughed At Me

A-though my heart is aching for her B-cause she laughed at me C-ause I said I would love her forever D-idn’t think she would be this cruel G-rabbed my things and walked out the door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/6/2018 9:05:00 PM
I can feel the door slamming...I was going to add in a "lol", but thought better of it... I couldn't help it, it's in there now. (p.s. that's a lol with you not at you!)
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/6/2018 9:37:00 PM
Glad you got a kick out of this.
Date: 2/5/2018 10:00:00 AM
Great!
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Lunita Blanca
Date: 2/5/2018 11:46:00 AM
Hi Kim.
Date: 2/5/2018 9:11:00 AM
Told to me by a friend some time ago Lewis.
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Date: 2/4/2018 8:34:00 PM
ouch, i like how direct this write is, good writing Carlos
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