Lunita Blanca Poet ABC

She Laughed At Me

A-though my heart is aching for her

B-cause she laughed at me

C-ause I said I would love her forever

D-idn’t think she would be this cruel 

G-rabbed my things and walked out the door

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton February 6, 2018 at 9:05 PM I can feel the door slamming...I was going to add in a "lol", but thought better of it... I couldn't help it, it's in there now. (p.s. that's a lol with you not at you!) Lunita Blanca February 6, 2018 at 9:37 PM Glad you got a kick out of this.

Kim Rodrigues February 5, 2018 at 10:00 AM Great! Lunita Blanca February 5, 2018 at 11:46 AM Hi Kim.

Lunita Blanca February 5, 2018 at 9:11 AM Told to me by a friend some time ago Lewis.

Lewis Raynes February 4, 2018 at 8:34 PM ouch, i like how direct this write is, good writing Carlos