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She Didn'T Mean It

like flowers in a zephyr of spring she danced in love's blossoms she loved him as much as any inexperienced lover could with all of her heart she'd even die for him oh how she giggled ...teasing about a text from an ex lover in a cute little way inquisitively waiting for his response hoping his love was true as any young lover would ...she knew how she felt she would die for him she watched as his eyes grew not amorously as she expected but anomalously to the point of rage she feared his touch his hands seemed less tender less loving than before his eyes more piercing than she recalled she watched as he became enraged someone she hated she said she'd die for him she didn't mean it literally ...she died by him instead

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Date: 2/21/2020 11:57:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your POTD, Sandra.. Your write is an absolute gem! So powerful and touching, my friend.. Really touched me! Have a blessed day..
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/23/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Robertina :) hugs
Date: 2/12/2020 2:51:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/12/2020 8:41:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim :) hugs
Date: 2/11/2020 3:02:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on this being selected as POTD, Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/11/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Line... hugs
Date: 2/11/2020 2:03:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on POTD Sandra....truly deserved! Hugs // paul
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/11/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you so much Paul...I was glad this one gained the exposure... hugs
Date: 2/10/2020 10:16:00 AM
This poem deserved all the honor it got. Congratulations on your POTD Sandy who would have thought that that she died by him, when she was prepared to die for him! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/10/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Jennifer. This world is a sad place anymore.... hugs
Date: 2/10/2020 9:38:00 AM
What a tragedy Sandra, congrats on POTD!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/10/2020 2:18:00 PM
Thank you John. Glad you stopped by to visit :) hugs
Date: 2/10/2020 6:58:00 AM
Congrats on potd my friend. You already know how I feel about this one. Very powerful and so very sad.
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Date: 2/10/2020 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris :)
Date: 2/9/2020 8:45:00 PM
Oh my!!! Your words gave me chills all over. "she died by him instead" This happens more everyday, and it shouldn't. How can anyone treat another in this way? Why would they even want to!? I don't understand and I probably never will. Sigh. Congratulations Sandra, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/9/2020 8:57:00 PM
Thank you so much Brandy... he killed her over a text from an ex... he videoed her dead body, he went to court on another charge while she lay there dead then when he got home took her to the hospital by an uber? not an ambulance and said she was breathing but wouldn't wake up... her body was 79 degrees... she was gone at 22...I don't get it either but her story haunted my muse until I wrote it... it hit very close to home... so tragic... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 7:47:00 PM
I am back to congratulate you on POTD Sandra. A chilling ending! xxoo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie...it was a tragic story... the details sickening.... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 6:20:00 PM
Sandra, you describe so well the emotional arc from innocent love to concern to ultimate tragedy. Your refrain of 'she would die for him' foreshadows so poignantly. Congrats ~ John
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Date: 2/9/2020 7:53:00 PM
thank you so much John....for some reason her story haunted my muse until I wrote it... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 2:56:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on POTD! your poetry comes alive with death!
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Date: 2/9/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Krish… emotions always bleed through my muse and I have seen much death in my life... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 1:36:00 PM
oh, how sad, Women our glued to some men. Some don't know when to walk away. I love the intense story you have written .. Congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/9/2020 7:52:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve... she was only 22... at that age sometimes they think they found love... apparently she was afraid that night, the uber driver says she told him you are scaring me... the uber driver drove up the road and listened until the arguing stopped and then left without calling the police... she is dead...so tragic... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the POTD. A great write. Love can be good, bad, sad, full of joy and full of pain. Looks like you hit it all. Have a wonderful day............
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Paula, sometimes love can be deadly... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 12:57:00 PM
Sandra, Rage and ruin at it's finest in your poem 'she didn't mean it'. You don't let the grass grow under your feet. Important to note, these little glimpses into a writer's soul. Even at such a cost to you, the bargain is struck. And what a bargain. -Richard
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Date: 2/9/2020 7:49:00 PM
thank you so much Richard, when I saw her story, I didn't know her but felt compelled to write about it...22 and gone at the hands of someone she loved... so sad.... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 12:24:00 PM
A sad twist at the end. But a great read that keeps getting more intense till the end. Congrats on POTD, Sandy. hugs Charlie x
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Date: 2/9/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you Charlie... she was only 22...shame it ended so sadly... details are still emerging... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 11:15:00 AM
You could feel a sinking feeling as you read this one. Congratulations.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 11:17:00 AM
thank you so much Sunlite… the details of the story as they unravel are sickening... so sad... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 10:41:00 AM
Congrats! Nice to see you won sweet lady x:-)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much my sweet friend.... I am glad this one got out there... it begged to be written... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so much Heidi... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, this is an awesome poem very nicely written. wonderfully told story. a harsh subject matter that is to often a reality. You handle this so incredibly... a brutal honest masterpiece....HUGS
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 10:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Robert... sad story, but it begged my muse to write about it... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 9:16:00 AM
So sad that love's blossoms withered, Congrats on POTD Sandra
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Date: 2/9/2020 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Joseph... she was only 22... so tragic... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 8:54:00 AM
A story well told...the sad side of love...Congrats!! on your POTD!! Sandra...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/9/2020 10:55:00 AM
Thank you so much WW... shame when a monster is loved and does this kind of thing... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 8:47:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 10:54:00 AM
thank you so much Daniel :) hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 7:31:00 AM
A story that needs to be told, and you have done so, so succinctly and creatively. Beautifully done Sandra. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 2/9/2020 8:28:00 AM
Oh my. The difference between knowing it happens and knowing it happened. Hugs back <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 8:22:00 AM
Thank you Maureen I felt the urge to write her story when it hit the news ... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 7:28:00 AM
WoW! Sandra, What a well written story filled with love, intrigue and suspense. Although I didn’t see the twist at the end, it took a good write to another level. “ Love is blind” popped in my head. Congratulations on getting poem of the day. It was well deserved-Alexis
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 8:21:00 AM
Thank you so much Alexis. Sad when love comes to this ... hugs
Date: 2/9/2020 6:59:00 AM
This have or die love, I'm still yet to understand, reflecting back to my youth I attributed it to hormones...A write many experience to their detriment...Congratulations Sandra on POTD
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/9/2020 7:36:00 AM
Young love that ended in tragedy. The story is sickening ...thank you Arturo ... hugs
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