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She Cannot Be Rushed

I stare at dusk-tinged mountains to the east,
anticipating joyously the rise
of an old friend not pressured in the least
 to meet my frantic schedule, I surmise.

I cannot rush the moon, although I reckon 
that if I could, I would request she hurried. 
Though "miles to go before I sleep" do beckon,
 the Empress of the night sky moves unworried.

Some obligations elsewhere do await
my undivided interest to be theirs.
But if I linger for her, I'll be late
 provoking shaking heads and unkind stares.

My heart of hearts desires to be unbound
from shackles of these deadlines and constraints;
to bathe in yellow radiance full and round
 and gaze in peace at this still life she paints.

Debating thus, she crowns over yon mountains;
entranced under her beauty, I stand hushed.
Her rays are elegant, florescent fountains -
 I'm thankful that the moon cannot be rushed.

Written May 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Wow this is beautiful and so deep! I love a moon poem and how creatively youv written this in such a cosmically intriguing manner that truly is meaningful. I love the depth of every line especially the ending… good to see this on home page! Pleasure reading this.
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 8:19 PM
I actually posted too a poem earlier referring to her as the empress of the sky. Ah i have so many moon poems, i have another old sonnet called “ empress of the night” I haven’t posted on soup yet. Ahh you did this so very well John. . Its full moon i think tonight or tomorrow night for us, i will be posting a new moon poem: im going to fave this poem i really loved it . I will read more of your work
Watt Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 2:27 PM
Thank you very much! As you can see from line 8, I love the word "empress". This was my first poem posted at poetry soup and it remains significant to me for that reason... also my wife and I love watching full moon rises. Appreciate the visit ~ John
Situation Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:23 AM
It is possible to watch Corn newly planted to grow out of the ground. I've seen it as a boy. and right now I see my heavenly Father see the tears in my eyes for that experience.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Wow you did FANTASTIC, John. We almost tied!! Big congrats, my friend.
Ashley Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 1:30 PM
My dearest PoBro, congratulations for your excellent final placement in Mark's Marathon contest. It is such a grand honor to share the podium with you, John. I'm delighted to partake in the lovely expression of this masterwork once again. Reading your amazing poetry is always a rapturous experience to be relished again and again. You inspire me so, my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~your PS-PS <3 <3 <3
Mcintosh Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 11:32 AM
oh! Wow. I just love this so. It's beautiful and bountiful and brilliant. Congrats on a so deserved win. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Lane Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:25 AM
John, one of my favorite poets ever to meet while in the pot of Soup... It was my pleasure to run the last 20 miles of the Marathon with you. Congratulations to you, kind sir. Your poetry is awesome.
Toney Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:18 PM
John, congratulations on your Fifth Place, overall win in my 2022 Poetry Marathon! Thank you so much for contributing to the success of the contest. The poems of the 28 qualifiers can be accessed from my current "Finish Line" blog post, along with the top 15 placements and their overall stats. Write on!
Ashley Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 9:47 PM
My dearest PoBro, it is indeed a wonderful thrill to return to reread this beautiful poem! On the surface this could be a mesmerizing poem about the anticipation and beauty of the rising moon, but beneath the surface the moon as a sensual metaphor could mean so much more.. I love to read this brilliant piece both ways and I still love that impressive last line that lingers so tenderly. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes for a wonderful Christmas, and may the stars, and the moon, shine ever more brightly for you, my inspiring friend.. your PS-PS <3
Kauffman Avatar
December 12, 2022 at 2:00 PM
John, dear friend, R&R bro, I wanted to take time to savor this beautiful poem over and over before sending you a note. Your poetic artistry rises like a full moon over mountains shedding its graceful rays in brilliant poetic moonbeams. This poem is elegant, serene, filled with images delicate as moonlight. You brilliantly combine your fascination and love of the rising moon with stunning poetry! Definitely a fav. Sending you Advent joy! P.S. I did my first program in 2 years yesterday!
Dietrich Avatar
December 11, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Congrats again . This poem is very good to you, my friend.
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Your thoughts on the moon appear to mirror my own, John, for I've always engendered her as female and the sun as male. Your writing is always enthralling and so well imagined. Mile 21 ends with a flourish for us.
Alex Avatar
December 8, 2022 at 5:37 AM
"Though "miles to go before I sleep" do beckon, the Empress of the night sky moves unworried" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
George Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 8:03 PM
Though we all have so many occupations to pursue and miles to go, we cannot hurry the moon to end her somnambulistic wanderings in the sky. Lovely imagination and great presentation. Congratulations John on your podium win.
Daniel Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations, John, on a wonderful win with a lovely poem:)
Toney Avatar
December 7, 2022 at 10:24 AM
John, I love "... anticipating joyously the rise ~ of an old friend not pressured in the least ~ to meet my frantic schedule, I surmise." We can all relate to that. Until Harry mentioned it below, I didn't realize that this is your first poem posted on Poetrysoup, back in 2016. Congratulations on your second-place podium finish on Mile 21 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 22 has already started.
Horsman Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 8:40 PM
So pleased to visit this gem, of your first post here, John. Harry.
Lindley Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Title got me. Then the poem was such a joy to read. This stanza especially so my friend. "" My heart of hearts desires to be unbound from shackles of these deadlines and constraints; to bathe in yellow radiance full and round and gaze in peace at the still life she paints"". A fav-and a fine gem too . God bless..
Watt Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 2:45 PM
Robert, thank you ever so kindly for going back to my first poetry soup submission and leaving such a thoughtful and supportive comment. You have highlighted the stanza that to me is the crux of the message. When I envision what heaven is like, I picture it with no clocks, deadlines, or staff meetings. I appreciate the fav as well.
Gauthier Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Back for another read ~ totally delightful, John.
Watt Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 11:01 PM
Delighted by your friendship and poetic interest. This is high praise from a poet I respect greatly. ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:08 PM
Lovely! Tonight, as I drove, I wanted to stare at the beautiful round moon but alas my eyes had to help me home.
Watt Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Kim, thank you for so kindly going back to the early days and blessing me with your read and comment. I'm like you, my eyes just want to gaze at God's creation.
Horne Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 1:14 PM
i really love your first ever post & what a beauty it is - i also love the moon
Watt Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Thank you for your comments today, Jack. They mean a lot to me. If you read this reply, please let me know of any moon-related poems you've written that you would like to share ~ John
Barden Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 5:11 AM
So many poems about the moon in this contest, (my favorite muse), and this is at the top for me - just exquisite work, my friend, and I'm so pleased I got the chance to get this soul food this morning - you have blessed my day! Superb - going in my faves! :o)
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 8:59 AM
Sir Bard, you have blessed my day as well. Thank you for the fave, I'm sure you can't know how much that means to me to be so honored. You're right about the moon as a wonderful muse, there is so much to draw from: mystery, light, beauty, romance, reflecting the sun, her phases and shadowy shapes, her rising and setting. Have a great day, my friend.
Daniel Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:32 PM
Simply beautiful and awe inspiring, John, congratulations on your lovely win :)
Watt Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 8:14 AM
Thank you Jo, your supportive words mean so much!
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 9:52 PM
you chose very very well with this winning poem. Congrats, my friend. I did not even make the HM part. Uggg.
Watt Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 9:55 PM
I didn't know. Thanks for being the one to tell me! Last time I looked there was 34 of 35 entries. Sorry yours didn't make it this time. Which one did you enter?
Faulkner Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Thank you for recommending this! Inspiration is like the moon, it can not be rushed either. I love the last stanza, it is so elegant and refined, just breath taking...
Watt Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Michelle, my favorite date with Janet is to watch a full moon rise. I wrote this after one of those dates. It really does slow me down and teaches me to live in the moment. Thanks for the affirming words.
Gauthier Avatar
August 4, 2020 at 10:24 PM
Love the romantic notion of not wanting to rush the moon. Beautiful ~
Watt Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, dear friend. Your comments are always appreciated ~ John
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