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She-Spider

My eyes got heavier, heavier... Gone, I sleep Dreaming I see before me A tree, but a house Inside it The door wide open Granting me a way in I stop Fear of not knowing Keeps me debating Should I I then see A woman of beauty Greater than any Ever seen I decide to approach And see her As I get near Her body convulses And she changes Before my eyes I freeze in fear She is now half woman And half spider Black widow Now I see the web Behind the house And tree She attacks me I fall over in fear I feel webbing Going around me Binding me Keeping me from moving Next my head Suffocating... I awaken To the dog Licking my face Such adoration Is really flattery I pet her Happy she's not A beautiful she-spider Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2011 10:29:00 PM
well let us hope this dream does not come true Russell and u never meet a half woman half spider type.. bravo for the licking dog..luv.. very unique storyline ...is this what men fear of women?
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Date: 8/9/2011 8:13:00 PM
It's like reading a script from "The Outer Limits" Russell. Disturbing readable, nice one :)
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Date: 8/9/2011 7:30:00 PM
What an imagination my friend, a spooky one to be sure but very effective.
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Date: 8/9/2011 4:21:00 AM
Saved by the dog, who aint a frog, WATCH FOR THE LADY SPIDER, oops she may be sweet this lady neat, but poison it just aint cider. love it cobber, Don
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:09:00 AM
lucky escape Russell, I think the dog could have left you in dream land a wee bit longer so I could see where you would end up ;) hehe just kidding, I enjoyed reading this gem this morning..
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Date: 8/9/2011 2:01:00 AM
a delightful twist made this unique and wonderful!
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:44:00 AM
Amusing write you have here..I am so glad your were dreaming...I am writing one on a dream,also...Thanks for the comment on mine..jo
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