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Shattered

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i lay here broken in the dark tucked beneath my widow’s cloak my heart in pieces stirred and haunted below the stars a wounded animal i stray i limp and wander lingering in circles wide a vagabond without her mate a soul idle hovering adrift amidst the fog AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on February 17, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (FEB 19) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST and on January 22, 2021 for contest OPEN POETRY I sponsored by CHARLOTTE PUDDIFOOT

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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/23/2021 4:39:00 PM
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Dearest Line Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with such an emotive and heartfelt poem, as you grieve for your soul mate; your words bringing tears to my eyes. God bless you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2021 6:14:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Ann. Most appreciated ~
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Constance La France
Date: 2/20/2021 8:51:00 AM
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Line, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderfully penned poem, nice image too _Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2021 9:07:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Constance ~ have a lovely weekend
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/19/2021 11:42:00 PM
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I can feel you Line....this journey is never an easy one....Congrats on your win...hugs.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2021 9:07:00 AM
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thank you so much, Carol ~
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2021 7:05:00 PM
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We feel for the heartache of your loss so eloquently said in those words Line... Belle
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2021 9:08:00 AM
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thank you very much, Belle ~
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/23/2021 1:45:00 PM
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you have described this exactly the way i imagine i'd feel in those circumstances, line. brilliantly written...
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2021 3:35:00 PM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Ilene ~
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/23/2021 8:43:00 AM
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An amazingly beautiful portrayal of bereavement
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2021 3:35:00 PM
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Thank you very much ~
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 1/23/2021 2:07:00 AM
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Beautifully done. God bless you with a comfort from heaven's shore. Love and prayers for you
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2021 3:36:00 PM
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Most appreciated, Gina ~
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/22/2021 11:23:00 PM
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Beautiful verse, line, Sorrow from a broken heart the pain will not last. My prayers are with you hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/23/2021 3:36:00 PM
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I cherish the pain that keeps me tied to my beloved ~

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