Shake Off the Wolf

steel clouds once more freeze
bare trees comfort each other
ripped trunk holds it together

the sun shields its eyes
its flames dying in Winter
the core feels the biting chill

it is in my bones
deep set; can’t shake off the wolf
its gray-fur-stare is howling

my hands crisp and crack
tips and knuckles peel like bark
soulless rain drips down the oaks

my knees turn from lies
thinking themselves well in Spring
they limp like twigs before snap

cerise cheeks remind
the otherwise bleak weather
that seasons will change in time

sun will siphon miasma
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Costales Avatar
February 8, 2024 at 10:26 PM
Hi Kim, this is a very clever but deep one, arouses my mind to wake up as from a stupor. I'm trying to stir myself to write again and reading talented poets to inspire me
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2024 at 5:44 AM
Thank you! Best wishes for writing!
Calasibetta Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Great imagery.....a feeling that resonates in the bones! Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Gentile Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 12:26 PM
Kim, you talent shines through here as your imagery really creates a biting chill through my bones! Congratulations on your POTD honors xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
January 27, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Thank you , Mike!
Maverick Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 12:44 PM
I am in a daze..Kim its still winter..There Is soulless rain I need to siphon some Sun, and my hosepipe is perished.'
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Oh no! Stay warm!
M  Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 10:24 AM
Congratulations Kim on POTD!! Debx
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:42 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a wonderful day with your win...................
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Thanks so much, Paula!
Greenhough Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 11:06 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Your poem of winter transcending to spring was beautiful. I especially liked the last line.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Oh thank you! Stay warm! :)
Buehler Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:46 PM
What a beautifully written, relatable poem! Heartfelt congratulations on POTD, Kim. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Thank you so much, dear Evelyn!
George Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:16 PM
Let us console ourselves with the thought that "If winter comes, can spring be far behind". The biting chill of winter is beautifully conveyed. A lovely poem. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD and also on your win in Brian's contest !
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa!
Roper Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:15 PM
congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 5:37 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Nicole Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:00 PM
Dear Kim, after reading your words, staying inside where it's nice and warm, sounds very inviting; indeed. So many reasons to like this season, but feeling the winter wind across delicate skin, isn't one of them. You've painted so many vivid images with your words. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Brandy! Stay warm! Hugs!
Anaya Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Kim Rodriques with an (s)! This seems a lot deeper though than a wintery day, described to pure detail and so well-done, chilling. Perhaps you're experiencing pre- "Wolf Moon" deliverance -- It reaches exact fullness tonight at 12:54 P.M. Eastern Time through the 25th! haha Hugs & stay warm
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Love your comment, Anaya! Will have to share with Gershon…lol!
One Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Slaughter Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:35 AM
I love this, Kim. Gave me a chill reading it...but in a good way. I especially like Line 2. Congrats on POTD, as well.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Thanks for liking line 2!
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 10:17 AM
Hello Kim, congratulations on the POTD. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 6:05 AM
Hello yes it is a nice surprise. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:46 PM
I really am! It is always a nice surprise. Blessings, sweet one!
Baker Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 9:26 AM
Great imagery and personification, Kim. Congratulation on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:46 PM
Thank you, dear Bill!
One Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Great use of the from here, I must have missed this one when you originally posted it.. Congrats on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:47 PM
Thank you! I so love seeing you regularly on PS! :)
Wolf Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Gosh. I'm so honored. LMAO. Seriously, congrats on POTD, Kim! ~ Shaken Off Wolf
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:47 PM
LOL! Arrooo!
Messina Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:16 AM
Very nice, Kim. Congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Charlie! :)
Fowler Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Ooh, I'm chilled and wrapped around myself. Great write Kim. Congratulations on POTD! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Linda! Stay warm!
Lane Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:56 AM
There are many very poetic phrases in this one, Kim. the sun's "flames dying in Winter," and the theme of not being able to shake off the wolf. Your personification is so vivid that I felt sorry for the monolithic trees having to stand in the cold, bare branched naked. Kudos for it being chosen poem of the day.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Ooh thank you so much for a great comment! I appreciate you, Lin!
Lawless Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:46 AM
"its grey-fur-stare is howling"... great image and vivid metaphor. Nicely done Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Thank you, dear one!
May Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:40 AM
Brr, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:49 PM
Brr and now it is cold, gray and raining but the contrast makes when the sun comes out all the much sweeter!
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:37 AM
Kim, a great poem, congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Tania!
Empress Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Dear Kim, Intriguing and descriptive write really. Brilliant diction throughout. Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Enjoy your day
Rodrigues Avatar
January 24, 2024 at 6:52 PM
Thank you so much!
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