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Shake Off the Wolf

steel clouds once more freeze bare trees comfort each other ripped trunk holds it together the sun shields its eyes its flames dying in Winter the core feels the biting chill it is in my bones deep set; can’t shake off the wolf its gray-fur-stare is howling my hands crisp and crack tips and knuckles peel like bark soulless rain drips down the oaks my knees turn from lies thinking themselves well in Spring they limp like twigs before snap cerise cheeks remind the otherwise bleak weather that seasons will change in time sun will siphon miasma

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Date: 2/8/2024 10:26:00 PM
Hi Kim, this is a very clever but deep one, arouses my mind to wake up as from a stupor. I'm trying to stir myself to write again and reading talented poets to inspire me
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/9/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thank you! Best wishes for writing!
Date: 1/31/2024 6:47:00 AM
Great imagery.....a feeling that resonates in the bones! Paulette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/31/2024 8:58:00 AM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 1/27/2024 12:26:00 PM
Kim, you talent shines through here as your imagery really creates a biting chill through my bones! Congratulations on your POTD honors xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2024 3:20:00 PM
Thank you , Mike!
Date: 1/25/2024 12:44:00 PM
I am in a daze..Kim its still winter..There Is soulless rain I need to siphon some Sun, and my hosepipe is perished.'
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 1:46:00 PM
Oh no! Stay warm!
Date: 1/25/2024 10:24:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on POTD!! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 11:30:00 AM
Thank you, Deb!
Date: 1/25/2024 5:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A lovely write. Have a wonderful day with your win...................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:47:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula!
Date: 1/24/2024 11:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Your poem of winter transcending to spring was beautiful. I especially liked the last line.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:36:00 AM
Oh thank you! Stay warm! :)
Date: 1/24/2024 9:46:00 PM
What a beautifully written, relatable poem! Heartfelt congratulations on POTD, Kim. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:36:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Evelyn!
Date: 1/24/2024 8:47:00 PM
well composed potd - a pleasure
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thanks, Mat! I appreciate that!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:36:00 AM
Thanks, Mat! I appreciate that!
Date: 1/24/2024 8:16:00 PM
Let us console ourselves with the thought that "If winter comes, can spring be far behind". The biting chill of winter is beautifully conveyed. A lovely poem. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD and also on your win in Brian's contest !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thank you very much, Valsa!
Date: 1/24/2024 8:15:00 PM
congratulations on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2024 5:37:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:00:00 PM
Dear Kim, after reading your words, staying inside where it's nice and warm, sounds very inviting; indeed. So many reasons to like this season, but feeling the winter wind across delicate skin, isn't one of them. You've painted so many vivid images with your words. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy! Stay warm! Hugs!
Date: 1/24/2024 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Kim Rodriques with an (s)! This seems a lot deeper though than a wintery day, described to pure detail and so well-done, chilling. Perhaps you're experiencing pre- "Wolf Moon" deliverance -- It reaches exact fullness tonight at 12:54 P.M. Eastern Time through the 25th! haha Hugs & stay warm
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:44:00 PM
Love your comment, Anaya! Will have to share with Gershon…lol!
Date: 1/24/2024 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 1/24/2024 10:35:00 AM
I love this, Kim. Gave me a chill reading it...but in a good way. I especially like Line 2. Congrats on POTD, as well.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:45:00 PM
Thanks for liking line 2!
Date: 1/24/2024 10:17:00 AM
Hello Kim, congratulations on the POTD. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/25/2024 6:05:00 AM
Hello yes it is a nice surprise. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:46:00 PM
I really am! It is always a nice surprise. Blessings, sweet one!
Date: 1/24/2024 9:26:00 AM
Great imagery and personification, Kim. Congratulation on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, dear Bill!
Date: 1/24/2024 8:31:00 AM
Great use of the from here, I must have missed this one when you originally posted it.. Congrats on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:47:00 PM
Thank you! I so love seeing you regularly on PS! :)
Date: 1/24/2024 7:35:00 AM
Gosh. I'm so honored. LMAO. Seriously, congrats on POTD, Kim! ~ Shaken Off Wolf
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:47:00 PM
LOL! Arrooo!
Date: 1/24/2024 7:16:00 AM
Very nice, Kim. Congratulations on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie! :)
Date: 1/24/2024 7:08:00 AM
Ooh, I'm chilled and wrapped around myself. Great write Kim. Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! Stay warm!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:56:00 AM
There are many very poetic phrases in this one, Kim. the sun's "flames dying in Winter," and the theme of not being able to shake off the wolf. Your personification is so vivid that I felt sorry for the monolithic trees having to stand in the cold, bare branched naked. Kudos for it being chosen poem of the day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:48:00 PM
Ooh thank you so much for a great comment! I appreciate you, Lin!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:46:00 AM
"its grey-fur-stare is howling"... great image and vivid metaphor. Nicely done Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:40:00 AM
Brr, Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:49:00 PM
Brr and now it is cold, gray and raining but the contrast makes when the sun comes out all the much sweeter!
Date: 1/24/2024 6:37:00 AM
Kim, a great poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2024 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Tania!
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