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Shadows of the Valley

O' moment of mist-glazed melancholia ~ I'm shrinking in paper-cut smokes of shrivelling sunsets, amidst the seizures of silence, there I surf ~ in swollen skulls of selfless swan-orchids, that once splattered pigments of poisoned pearls upon navy-neon shrine of the sun, who traded my scars with an eloquent eclipse and buried me in metallic merlots, beneath mercuric lakes of myths. Tonight, hear me as I sing in pencil-sketched debris of pensive dandelions, ferrying through the mine-fields of monarchial mints ~ building catastrophic castles upon bloodstones, where corpses of intuition remain clustered in clueless imaginations. Perhaps, my soul is the sigh of graffiti graphites ~ stretched as soft sparks across the ebony elegies of this iron-inked agony, chiseled by the spice of snow-tailed stars, and I've become a silhouette of ageless sorrow, stitched by the soliloquy of seawaves ~ who shaped me with sepias as a dagger in my own shadow, engrossed in the illicit illumination of an eagle-eyed iris. With the hunter's instinct, as the wolf-howl breaks my ribcage and kisses that crying sky ~ drape me in lunar dew, where vitriolic veins entwine in the mosaic of camphor cobwebs ~ and slay glittering goblins with time-slashing swords. For, I shall soon breathe the rebellion of catharsis, in the valley of death ~ when tears of heart, trapped in whiskey-rose ruffles of russet rays, drizzle through a disastrous dispersion, emanating secret sirens that swallowed spiritual sailors ~ once serenaded by those seven shades of sin. I wonder, can you feel my shivers as I dip my fingers in the venom of volatile violets, who never heard my cries ~ as I'm plucked like the last word of woe from those stems of porcelain damsels ~ dripping diamond dreams upon freckled garnet gravels? do those blackcurrant crystals, coiling the moon, still grieve... for feigning ignorance to this foliage of flaming fears ~ ignited in the lamp of bones? Or Is love but a lie, engaged to the tomb of emerald tyrannies — like a mistress of harlequin melodies? "maybe, In Litha's mirror I shall slowly burn ~ draped in cyanide conspiracies of crimson memories, bleeding a diabolical dance of deja vu, upon the grave of butterflies who never fluttered... and I'm the skeletal silk of nocturnal buds, veiled in black, a bride of nefarious mantras ~ blooming in nightglow wisps, as leaf-lacerated twilight forevermore tapers me away..."

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Date: 5/21/2025 9:25:00 PM
Dear Hiya, you are the rightful inheritor of Empress's talents- both in the use of metaphors and alliterations and in the buoyancy of imagination... indeed a twin sister to her. Usages like 'mist glazed melancholia, seizures of silence, silhouette of ageless sorrow, diamond dreams, foliage of flaming fears'- all these are stunning. "drape me in lunar dew, where vitriolic veins entwine in the mosaic of camphor cobwebs ~" Wonderful ! The tone of melancholy in this poem can't be better expressed by anyone else. At this age, if you can perform so well, I am sure you'll soar to astonishing heights too soon. All the Best, young sister.
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Date: 5/21/2025 5:02:00 PM
You're a journey- you're on a journey, poetry princess lol <3 love this, so many deep lines, "do those blackcurrant crystals, coiling the moon, still grieve... for feigning ignorance to this foliage of flaming fears ~ ignited in the lamp of bones?" wow
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Date: 5/21/2025 1:29:00 PM
You left me wanting to rescue you from the wolves and gently slapping your fingers before you could reach for toxic violets. Step out of those shadows! You put much thought into creating a realm of darkness and quite convincingly.
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Date: 5/21/2025 9:59:00 AM
My dear mini me angelic star! Im so happy to see you post again after a long time on soup and your metaphors here are so powerful and soul stirring! I dont know where to begin even, praising this colorful yet dark and deeply emotive poem that flows and has that poignant pulse and heartbeat, echoing so many emotions that i resonate with too! I really love how you’ve written “seizures of silence” “trapped in whiskey-rose ruffles of russet rays, ” and the ending too how youv expressed inspired by the song is truly so very soulful! Your use of poetic techniques and the way youv paired words are all so very impressive!i cant help but admire how youv stated”
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Date: 5/21/2025 10:02:00 AM
“I'm the skeletal silk of nocturnal buds, veiled in black, a bride of nefarious mantras ~ blooming in nightglow wisps, as leaf-lacerated twilight forevermore tapers me away..." wow! How even can a poet of your age write and weave such deep emotions is beyond me but well its you. Intelligent one that feels so many emotions and have seen so many flavors of life! I cant help but fave this! And i know robert loves metaphors so he will definitely be in awe! Probably a top win! Best wishes my angelic star! Sending you light always! Keep sharing more on soup!!!

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