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Shadows and Rainbows

A bright sunny day The shadows seen Everywhere outside Shining brightly Rainbows of color Shining brightly Until the sunshine Has slowly faded

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Date: 1/12/2023 4:32:00 PM
Hello Darlene,a beautiful poem,Darlene Be blessed!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/13/2023 4:48:00 AM
Hello Mulu, Thank you for the lovely comment. Thank you. Be blessed my friend.
Date: 10/17/2021 3:53:00 PM
Lovely write love the imagery.
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Date: 10/19/2021 10:26:00 AM
Hello Karen Jones, Hi! so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
Date: 8/7/2021 5:09:00 PM
I like how you combined two phenomenon that make a terrific poem.
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Date: 8/9/2021 6:23:00 AM
Hello Caren, thank you Caren. I love rainbows and shadows. Everything has a shadow. Hugs.
Date: 8/2/2021 11:54:00 AM
Hello, Darlene ma'am, it's so beautiful. Have a nice time.
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Date: 8/2/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hello Plabi, I love the rainbows with so many pretty colors. Thank you for the lovely comment my friend.
Date: 7/29/2021 3:47:00 PM
Darlene, lovely poem, very enjoyable, I have finished my poem, Holding Back Tears now if you wish to return ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 7/30/2021 10:20:00 AM
Hello Constance , thank you for the lovely comment. I will read your poem. Love & serenity, Darlene.
Date: 7/29/2021 5:52:00 AM
Yes, nature always thrills, be it shadows or rainbows,... and a poem with good imagery, let me add.
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Date: 7/29/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Aniruddla, Thank you Anirudha, for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend.
Date: 7/27/2021 12:59:00 PM
Cool poem about fleeting moments.
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Date: 7/27/2021 4:04:00 PM
Hello Jennifer Fenn, thank you for the lovely comment. so nice to meet you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 7/26/2021 12:12:00 AM
Hello Darlene. Thanks for your wonderful comments on my poem. How are robin kids? How much they have grown? Tell me more about them.
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:51:00 AM
Hello Rama, i am not able to sit on the deck because the robin comes flying and chases me away. She has two nest not far from the other. So she is a busy bird. They have grown i think they will fall out from the nest they are big now. Blessing my friiend.
Date: 7/25/2021 7:20:00 PM
I adore rainbows,,,,so nicely done, Pangie xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:52:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I love rainbows to. Hugs xx
Date: 7/25/2021 2:58:00 PM
Hi Darlene. I enjoyed this very much. I felt like I was right there seeing all the shadows and colors. Very nice :)
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Date: 7/25/2021 3:22:00 PM
Hello Heidi, The shadows do come out in sunshine. I like a rainy sunny day when the rainbows come out. enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 7/25/2021 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on becoming a full-time member. Your poem is full of colors. Well done.
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Date: 7/25/2021 3:19:00 PM
Hello Victor, Thank you. Yes it is. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/25/2021 12:19:00 PM
short but very sweet. Well done. I will look at te rest of your work and let you know how I feel about them
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Date: 7/25/2021 12:39:00 PM
Hello Mickey , so nice to met you. thank you for the lovely comment. I look forward to your comments. I will be reading your poetry later. enjoy your day my freind.
Date: 7/24/2021 9:16:00 PM
Good creation of nature's portrait
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Date: 7/25/2021 7:05:00 AM
Hello C. L. Sivaranjan, so nice to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. I will be reading your poetry. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/24/2021 6:47:00 PM
Very Nice!
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Date: 7/25/2021 7:07:00 AM
Hello Louvenia, Hi! Sonican to meet you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/24/2021 2:42:00 PM
Hi Darlene, I love how there seems to be a little pause with the last three lines revealing that you are perceiving a shift of the shadows. Your use of repeating phrases is very effective in this lovely poem. Blessings, dear Poet.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/24/2021 3:05:00 PM
Hello Carol Moon, thank you Carol for this lovely comment. blessings my friend. Enjoy your evening.
Date: 7/24/2021 11:56:00 AM
Shadows and Rainbows - charming! Darlene, you observe the unique things in nature, and express with real emotions. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/24/2021 3:07:00 PM
Hello Mala, Thank you for the lovely comment. I love the nature scenes. Friendship & Love. Darlene
Date: 7/23/2021 10:50:00 PM
Lovely combination shadows and rainbows, very nice indeed...Delice
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Date: 7/24/2021 10:24:00 AM
Hello Delice, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 7/23/2021 12:19:00 PM
Wall to wall sunshine Darlene Is what your wonderful innocent poem brings to mind, reminds me of those past school days summer holidays, cheers David
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Date: 7/23/2021 3:53:00 PM
Hello David Kavanagh, Hi! I am so pleased to bring back memories of your past school days summer holidays. Cheers! Darlene
Date: 7/22/2021 9:14:00 PM
Loved it especially the words rainbow of colours shining brightly.
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Date: 7/23/2021 3:56:00 PM
Hello Rama, Rama I like this lines to. Thank you for the lovely comment. Blessings my friend.
Date: 7/22/2021 11:44:00 AM
Two of my favorite things Darlene! Lovely poem, Happy Thursday xxoo
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:46:00 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, oh! I am happy to read this message. Happy Thursday Mike. Enjoy y9ur evening my friend. xxxx-oooo
Date: 7/22/2021 11:15:00 AM
The natural beauty around us is truly amazing. Nicely done.
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:48:00 PM
Hello Marliene Evens, Yes the natural beauty is great! Thank you Marliene enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 7/22/2021 11:08:00 AM
Love the imagery on what nature offers. Tom
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:49:00 PM
Hello Tom, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 7/22/2021 11:00:00 AM
- A day of beauty, Darlene :) - Have a lovely evening :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:50:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes a day of beauty Hugs Darlene
Date: 7/22/2021 10:42:00 AM
lovely imagery Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/22/2021 3:51:00 PM
Hello Jan, I hope all is well with you. Thank you for the l9vely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.

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