Sevenseven

Easel on her hill of greenness 
Cheeks shyly red of a virgin sight
Breeze tickle eyelashes and paintbrush
Ocean tries to guess the coast's vibrations

Storm of petals land on a blank canvas
Rainbows cry hidden-in-the-background gardens
She drops her brush, her fingers weak and helpless
She never knew Souls can melt in liquid desire

Bells on sheep play an antique choir's tune
He lets her pony tail loose in a "Be gentle" whisper
The kiss of Gods on an angel's face, eyelids closed
A dove surrounded by sheltering, unexplainable tenderness

                                          *
     
" I MUST GO"....
"I know"...
Understood, Heavenly Silence
"Be HIS Mother!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Onclaud Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 4:40 PM
congrats for th efantastic win, iolanda... all the best! :) hugggs, nette
Brown Avatar
April 13, 2011 at 4:40 AM
Congratulations for your win Iolanda in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
Caliri Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 10:00 AM
Congrats in your 2ND PLACE WIN in my contest! Love the first line...
Freeman Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations Iolanda, having your poetry selected for round 2. Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 9:48 PM
way to go, Iolanda with your three entries getting thru round one .and THIS one is superb. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:46 AM
An awesome display of your worthy talent in Pastoral, Iolanda Agape, Moses
Villarosa Avatar
March 28, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Great imagery, excellent in choosing words. Congratulations! on winning this contest, Iolanda. (^_^) Noel.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:16 PM
ps. still waiting for your bithdate, Iolanda!
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:13 PM
wow, I love the subtle eroticism mixed into this lovely one. Congrats on your HM. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your HM in Brian's contest.. a wonderful honor for u to so enjoy .. luv the beautiful descriptive words so brilliant and vivid..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Richards Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 8:55 AM
What a beauty!! This is a gorgeous poem, Iolanda!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
White Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 3:40 AM
So nice, Such gentleness Congrats Iolanda
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:24 AM
Iolanda, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:02 AM
Congrats on your success in my contestIolanda.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
Strand Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 12:50 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian
Smith Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 11:57 AM
this is a great write i love the line a dove surrounded by sheltering, unexplainable tenderness. =)jo
Sweetheart Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 5:50 AM
Beautiful words Iolanda and such intensity too... wonderful write... thankxxx so much for your blog comment .. I also had my Christopher on V.D. ... isn't life grand??? luv.. blessings... Linda-Marie..
George   Avatar
January 25, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Absolutely beath-taking. What a vivid moving picture with all the senses overflowing, you have painted, Iolanda. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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January 24, 2010 at 3:39 PM
This is lovely...and so mysterious. Leaves me wondering about the back story.......
Ryerson Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 10:37 PM
Very beautiful, Iolanda...the lines flow perfectly... I'm very curious now about what the comment at the end means - Tim
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2010 at 6:22 PM
This is very pretty poetry, Iolanda. thanks for your comment tonight. andrea
Ace Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 5:04 AM
A very soft and vivid write. I totally enjoyed reading this. Lightwalker
Nutter Avatar
January 22, 2010 at 2:57 AM
Great imagery in this write the pictures you painted were very vivid.
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