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Easel on her hill of greenness Cheeks shyly red of a virgin sight Breeze tickle eyelashes and paintbrush Ocean tries to guess the coast's vibrations Storm of petals land on a blank canvas Rainbows cry hidden-in-the-background gardens She drops her brush, her fingers weak and helpless She never knew Souls can melt in liquid desire Bells on sheep play an antique choir's tune He lets her pony tail loose in a "Be gentle" whisper The kiss of Gods on an angel's face, eyelids closed A dove surrounded by sheltering, unexplainable tenderness * " I MUST GO".... "I know"... Understood, Heavenly Silence "Be HIS Mother!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/13/2011 4:40:00 PM
congrats for th efantastic win, iolanda... all the best! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 4/13/2011 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Iolanda in the contest "Why We Must Go On" sponsored by Matt Caliri. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 10:00:00 AM
Congrats in your 2ND PLACE WIN in my contest! Love the first line...
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Date: 11/10/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda, having your poetry selected for round 2. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/9/2010 9:48:00 PM
way to go, Iolanda with your three entries getting thru round one .and THIS one is superb. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/25/2010 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being picked to be featured this week Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/30/2010 8:46:00 AM
An awesome display of your worthy talent in Pastoral, Iolanda Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/28/2010 12:37:00 AM
Great imagery, excellent in choosing words. Congratulations! on winning this contest, Iolanda. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/26/2010 4:16:00 PM
ps. still waiting for your bithdate, Iolanda!
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Date: 3/26/2010 4:13:00 PM
wow, I love the subtle eroticism mixed into this lovely one. Congrats on your HM. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/25/2010 9:06:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your HM in Brian's contest.. a wonderful honor for u to so enjoy .. luv the beautiful descriptive words so brilliant and vivid..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:55:00 AM
What a beauty!! This is a gorgeous poem, Iolanda!! Congratulations!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/25/2010 3:40:00 AM
So nice, Such gentleness Congrats Iolanda
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Date: 3/25/2010 2:24:00 AM
Iolanda, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
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Date: 3/25/2010 2:02:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contestIolanda.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
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Date: 3/24/2010 12:50:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Iolanda.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/11/2010 11:57:00 AM
this is a great write i love the line a dove surrounded by sheltering, unexplainable tenderness. =)jo
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Date: 1/27/2010 5:50:00 AM
Beautiful words Iolanda and such intensity too... wonderful write... thankxxx so much for your blog comment .. I also had my Christopher on V.D. ... isn't life grand??? luv.. blessings... Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:56:00 AM
Absolutely beath-taking. What a vivid moving picture with all the senses overflowing, you have painted, Iolanda. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 1/24/2010 3:39:00 PM
This is lovely...and so mysterious. Leaves me wondering about the back story.......
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Date: 1/23/2010 10:37:00 PM
Very beautiful, Iolanda...the lines flow perfectly... I'm very curious now about what the comment at the end means - Tim
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Date: 1/23/2010 6:22:00 PM
This is very pretty poetry, Iolanda. thanks for your comment tonight. andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 5:04:00 AM
A very soft and vivid write. I totally enjoyed reading this. Lightwalker
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Date: 1/22/2010 2:57:00 AM
Great imagery in this write the pictures you painted were very vivid.
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