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I feel the effervescent waterfall; stinging droplets, draping me like a shawl. The smooth-flowing water seems so serene, as though an artist's brush painted the scene, I hear the gurgling laugh of tickled rocks, playing with time in a land without clocks. The forest flaunts fantastic fronds of green, lemon to jade and all shades in between. Ferns and mosses subtly scent the damp air, a combo of earthy smells, sweet and rare. Captivated by Nature's masterpiece I inhale deep breaths, then slowly release.

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Date: 9/28/2019 10:06:00 PM
Emile, a beautiful sigh and poignant words. Love it. Lonna
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Lonna, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 4:58:00 PM
Emile congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem!
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 2:29:00 PM
Every poem I have read from this picture is just magic and I can see why yours is at the top too. I don't need to see the picture to see this lovely scene. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:05:00 AM
Thanks so much Jeanne, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 7:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem, Emile :) - A truly amazing picture Eve chose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 12:02:00 AM
This poem is so lovely Emile, very deserving of your First Placement! Congratulations my friend. Eve certainly got what she asked for! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thanks Connie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/25/2019 10:57:00 PM
Love your imagery and the emotions, Emile, congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:40:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/11/2019 10:30:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful You covered all of the requirements for the contest in such a fantastic poem. One would not even need the image to see in there mind what you have described. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 9/11/2019 2:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris, I'm ecstatic that you enjoyed it that much my friend.
Date: 9/11/2019 10:23:00 AM
The title drew me in, and I was overcome with a serenity in your words, nature and poetry in symbiotic perfection...enjoyed!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/11/2019 2:43:00 PM
Thank you John, you honor me with your words my friend, Emile.

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