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SERENDIPITY

August wind, glass moon,serendipity... two chairs gazing at each other in tender flow. Hundred miles away, clouds gather to fondle the opening and closing of after- midnight refrains, both trespassing a continental divide to awaken upon scrolls of ramblings united by the sorcery of mystic spaces between humid lenses. On such lit evenings, I will surrender to the maleness of a trembling heart ; your cheeks swollen like yeast…a shaven head, the blue of your shirt buried in my cellar unbuttoning the heaving pauses between the nearness of our skin… Chairs grind in wanton anticipation of palms touching my hair… you whisper, “ I adore you beyond words.”... and I; I falter while a glint climbs into the almond of my Oreo eyes… The scent of hours lingers as we wrap our fingers into morn, owning a body language in play of charades… Your mouth hushed, searching the curves of my spine glazed by soft bites of an August wind brushing our lips…until the slide screen fades off, and we are dissolved into a paradise inhabiting unborn stars. In raw enchantment, our warmed glances wait for a next time, as if a tarot of angels had known about serendipity.
PD's Best Love Poem # 3

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/21/2015 10:47:00 AM
until the slide screen fades off, and we are dissolved into a paradise inhabiting unborn stars...lovely :) Congrats on the win :) God bless
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:59:00 AM
Quite passionate, nicely written, congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/21/2015 7:17:00 AM
"our warmed glances wait for a next time" really love this line. So beautiful, Nette.
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Date: 11/21/2015 6:30:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful, Nette. A pleasurable journey into the realm of passion; the reader is seduced by its beauty! Congratulations on placing first in this contest...much deserved. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/21/2015 1:03:00 AM
" Your mouth hushed,searching the curves of my spine..." You have words for every act nette; that is what is making you thick,respect. Congrats on the first place ...hugs
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Date: 11/21/2015 12:21:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your awesome number one placement. ThanXs for supporting my contest. <3 Love SKAT
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Date: 11/3/2013 9:30:00 AM
soupmail.
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:07:00 AM
amazing as usual nette and as usual never leaves me with not much to say.. truly wondrous poetry this is....
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
Gotta read this! Nette! Wow! To mine faves! jimbo
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Date: 10/19/2013 6:10:00 AM
Originally drawn to this poem by the title I see this wonderfully masterful poem. Well done!
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Date: 10/19/2013 2:50:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments Nette.Although I no longer blog here(too busy with my kindle publishing) I have posted my poetry here regularly as I see it as a repository for my poetic endeavours and is a reflection of how I have progressed as a poet.Have a good weekend.Rgds Brian
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:02:00 AM
I ve read so many enchanting poems of yours but holy moly cow..I can hear your passionate vibe in each verse here.Excellent..sensual..ardent ..full of yearn..sizzling and going to my favs
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Date: 10/18/2013 9:39:00 PM
You are a writer extraordinaire my dear Nette... once more you have proven it! Kudos Big hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:14:00 PM
Hoo-hoo, exquisite writing, as is your wont, Nette. Simply beautiful, Queen of Linguistics. Methinks you'd like a look-see at my "Fave Poets Meet", my talented friend. Licia ;-)
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:13:00 PM
You have left me breathless again! anther for my favorites.
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:02:00 PM
WOW Nette, you have written another masterfully sensuous write my friend! Only one other poem of yours has even come close to the ecstasy of this incredible poem! The tenderness within this glorious piece is beyond compare, the passion is over the top awesome! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/18/2013 1:36:00 PM
Some lucky guy! This is OUTSTANDING both in form and content. I believe it to be simultaneously delicate and sensual expressed with well formed grace. A poem embracing the nearness of love and passion.
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Date: 10/18/2013 1:32:00 PM
ONE OF YOUR BEST!!!!! ABSOLUTE BEST!!!! THE BEST!!!! Amazing, my dear....simply amazing! :) WOW!!!
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:31:00 PM
Very sweet romantic poem adorned with sweet imagination. Its like a beautiful dream. Enjoyed a lot. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:28:00 PM
(FAINT) Where in the WORLD did this come from? Holy damn! Your poems normally leave me without much to say. But, this piece......I am just breathless. Somebody get me an oxygen tank. Such sensuality. Such sheer want. "Raw enchantment"..."Oreo eyes"...fantastic. Me want cookie!
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:43:00 AM
- Yes, Nette !!!!! - Friday ..... - WEEKEND!!!! - A beautiful poem & "I love you more than words." - oxox // Anne-Lise :))
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