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Sequence Ebb & Flow

Whipped
by the
raging wind,
white horses ride
the
tide
until 
exhausted-
die upon the
shore

Inspired by Winslow Homer's paintings of the American seaboard at Maine

Copyright © Brian Strand | Year Posted 2009

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Vince Suzadail Jr. Date: 1/29/2010 6:40:00 PM Congrats Brian on "sequence Ebb & Flow" being featured. Vince Login to Reply

Ann Rich Date: 1/28/2010 7:47:00 AM Buddhamus! Congrats. AR Login to Reply

Jared Pickett Date: 1/27/2010 6:46:00 AM Excellent verse here friend... Congrats on the feature this week.....:JP] Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 1/25/2010 7:02:00 PM Top-notch feature,Brian. Congratulations, Sincerely, Moses Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 1/25/2010 2:42:00 PM Yep! This fits in my memory very well...I think you've put wonderful motion into your stormy seashore. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver Login to Reply

Janette Fisher Date: 1/25/2010 11:08:00 AM Brian another wonderful piece many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/25/2010 8:45:00 AM I am so glad to see this poem again, another chance to capture the images of "white horses" on the tide! ~ Congratulations on this featured work! ~ Best regards, Carrie Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 1/24/2010 9:26:00 PM Congrats Brian on your featured poem of the week on the Soup... excellent choice... luv.. Linda-Marie.. Login to Reply

Jo Bien Date: 1/24/2010 6:04:00 PM congrats Brian...I like this...JB Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 1/24/2010 4:47:00 PM congrats on the featured poem, nicely penned. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/24/2010 1:57:00 PM Many congratulations in you deserved featured poem this week, Brian >> James Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/24/2010 1:40:00 PM Congratulations are your well deserved featured poem this week Brian. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 10/21/2009 3:20:00 AM Brian, Congratulations, on your placement in the June 2009 Poetry Soup contest. I hope you are basking in the glory! You deserve it. Thanks for all you do to help us stretch as poets through your contests. Lovingly, Dane Ann Login to Reply

Krista Kurth Date: 10/19/2009 9:46:00 AM Congratulations Brian on the honorable mention and also on the imagery evoked by your poem. I could see the wild waves on the shore. All the best, Krista Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 10/19/2009 5:54:00 AM INCREDIBLE POWERFUL IMAGES THAT IMPLANT A POWERFUL MESSAGE IN THE MIND OF THE READER. CONGRATULATIONS ON THIS MASTERPIECE WIN, BRIAN. LAINIE Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 10/15/2009 6:39:00 PM congratulations Brian Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 10/15/2009 11:15:00 AM Congrats to you dearest Brian!!! xoxoxo Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 10/15/2009 8:13:00 AM congrats brian on a notable win in this contest well deserved and well written such sad imagery tho keep up the great writing Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/14/2009 2:02:00 PM beautiful poem, ongrats on the HM in the contest!! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/14/2009 11:31:00 AM Many congratulations in this 2009 contest Brian well done >> James Login to Reply

Robin L. Gass Date: 10/14/2009 4:19:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved Win, Brian, with this beautifully written piece! Love, Robin Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/14/2009 4:05:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Brian. Love,Carol Login to Reply

Jim Fish Date: 10/13/2009 10:30:00 PM Congratulations on your poem, Brian. Great work, of course. Catch you up the trail ~<>< Login to Reply

Lena Pate Date: 10/13/2009 8:18:00 PM Well deserved. Imagery artistic. Congratulations on placing in the finals. Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 10/13/2009 7:40:00 PM Congratulations my friend for winning poem in the finals!!! Very well deserved. I'm so very happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply

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