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Sequence - Footle - All Hallows' Eve

The doomed
entombed

Now rise
death cries

In fear
we hear

Death trills
blood chills......




Inspired by Donna Goldens' Footle Fright contest

Copyright © Robin L. Gass | Year Posted 2009

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Cecil Hickman Date: 10/27/2009 11:25:00 PM woderful and scary a very indepth piece for Halloween and Congratulations on your win,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/27/2009 7:20:00 AM congrats on the second place, great poem!! Login to Reply

Date: 10/26/2009 4:52:00 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your second place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/26/2009 4:03:00 PM Well done Robin and congrats on your win. Thank you for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/26/2009 2:08:00 PM You go Gal!!! Big winner!! Light & Love Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/26/2009 6:44:00 AM Congratulations, Robin! Love your footle series. A well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/26/2009 6:32:00 AM Great job, Robin! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/26/2009 4:15:00 AM Congrats in you win in Donna's footle contest >> James Login to Reply

Corinne Curcio Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM Congrats on your EXCELLENT footle win, Robin Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Robin. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sean Kelly Date: 10/26/2009 12:19:00 AM A Royal footle success , QR and well done .... Login to Reply

Donna Golden Date: 10/25/2009 10:22:00 PM Wonderful footle, Robin! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna Login to Reply

Cecil Hickman Date: 10/18/2009 10:06:00 PM a powerful sequence of words and thoughts that set forth the Halloween theme so very well,,,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 10/17/2009 9:07:00 AM the only time of year to laugh at monsters and horror. i love it. jhl Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 10/16/2009 7:03:00 PM Awsome footle Robin, Wickedly witty, my Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/16/2009 5:34:00 PM yike scary wow! Light & Love Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/16/2009 2:44:00 PM Awesome Footle Robin, if this don't get into the winners enclosure > i should be turned into a pumpkin for my prediction not being proven to be true >> James Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 10/16/2009 1:38:00 PM great job, nicely penned. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 10/16/2009 12:28:00 PM We must bow to the footle Mistress! This is quite a wicked write! Oops, I think I hear something groaning at the door. Could it be? Oh, no! Robin was right! Love you, dear. Carolyn Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 10/16/2009 12:21:00 PM Excellent sequence QR, this was a fun contest...Raul Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/16/2009 12:01:00 PM Good luck in the contest. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/16/2009 9:52:00 AM Great entry to the contest Robin.. a spooky tale told in few words! ~ Love, Carrie Login to Reply

Date: 10/16/2009 8:52:00 AM Yikes! Fitting for Halloween. I like the strong ending. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen Login to Reply

Marty Owens Date: 10/16/2009 7:36:00 AM These are good...good luck in the contest...Marty Login to Reply