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Delicious is the rain falling, blinding the sun With its rhythmic beating, calming all worries Reassuring the spirit its poetry won't be outdone Silencing the laughter of the light's diaries With its rhythmic beating, calming all worries Whispering gentle joy into the heart's vibration Silencing the laughter of the light's diaries Bringing to life the beauty of tender sensation Whispering gentle joy into the heart's vibration Promising the wind a song that will stir wonder Bringing to life the beauty of tender sensation Roaring with grace brought to life by the thunder Promising the wind a song that will stir wonder Silence so powerful it breathes soothing prayers Roaring with grace brought to life by the thunder Pure serenity brushing away every echo of tears Silence so powerful it breathes soothing prayers Liquid groanings poured out on the quiet earth Pure serenity brushing away every echo of tears Surrounding the soul’s vision with rumbling worth Liquid groanings poured out on the quiet earth Reassuring the spirit its poetry won't be outdone Surrounding the soul’s vision with rumbling worth Delicious is the rain falling, blinding the sun

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Date: 9/12/2022 6:51:00 AM
This reads so easily and smoothly Gina. Beautiful imagery flowing from one line to the next. La
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:56:00 AM
Gina, this is an absolutely lovely pantoum, well-crafted and flowing like they should. I enjoyed it so much. Hope you're having a fine weekend.
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/10/2022 7:58:00 AM
Thank you so much. I always had trouble writing these but it just came easy today for some reason... maybe because it is raining here :) You have a great weekend too. God bless you. Love, Gina

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