Sentimentality

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I hate ... fake compliments rolling off the lips of nasty people you know the type - S M I L I N G to your face while they hold a hidden dagger ready to stab you in the back ... but I can see through their disguise of a ~ HUMAN BEING ~ I see the devil and his evil sentimentality ... that is sweet, sickening and disgusting_ ______________________ May 22, 2022 Poetry/Free Verse/Sentimentality Copyright Protected, ID 05-1458-018-22 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Sentimentality Sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 06/05/2022 Third Place

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/9/2022 10:28:00 AM

Amen Constance. In life we instinctively know the people we can trust and those who drip with the false. Vibrant imagery! Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2022 6:34:00 AM

Sam, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/6/2022 6:20:00 AM

Very beautifully illustrated the hypocrisy of people. Congratulations!

Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2022 10:04:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Terry Miller

Date: 6/6/2022 5:15:00 AM

Well done on getting the brief correct and your win

Constance La France
Date: 6/7/2022 10:05:00 AM

Terry, thank you so much for the compliment on my win, blessings ~Constance

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/5/2022 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations to you for having written what the host was searching for in this contest, Constance. I could never figure out what that was.

Constance La France
Date: 6/5/2022 3:20:00 PM

Jenna, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings ~Constance

Julia Ward
Date: 6/5/2022 11:07:00 AM

I made it perfectly clear as was confirmed from the entries into my contest.

J. Summers

Date: 5/23/2022 8:00:00 AM

Reminded me of an old song by The O'Jays called Back Stabbers. Much enjoyed. John

Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2022 9:45:00 AM

John, thank you so much for the visit, comment and compliment, I do not know that song, will have to look for it, blessings ~Constance