Linda Alice Fowler Poet Couplet

Sense of I's and T's

Immovable object that you see?
Truly not, if you allow it free. 

Intolerable silence you hear?
Try softening your sense of fear.

Impersonal, harsh touch of old love?
Therapeutic caress from above.

Inevitable in taste of grief?
Transitioning stages for relief.

Infinite smell of Autumn decay?
Tumbling leaves in dull, damp, dying day.

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Bill Baker August 23, 2022 at 8:28 AM I like the creativity in this one, Linda. It should place well in the contest. Bill Linda Alice Fowler August 23, 2022 at 9:53 AM Hi Bill my friend. Thanks for the stop by and good thoughts. Linda

Gershon Wolf August 21, 2022 at 5:50 PM So many 'IT's,' Linda. You must be in Information Technology! ~gw Linda Alice Fowler August 22, 2022 at 7:21 AM Long ago...before Apples fell from the trees LOL Thanks for stopping by gw! laf

Mystic Rose Rose August 20, 2022 at 10:17 AM You have solved the problems if I T lol, what a witty write, gl in the contest Linda, this is awesome :) Linda Alice Fowler August 20, 2022 at 10:25 AM You are too kind my friend ;) Thanks for stopping by! Linda

L Milton Hankins August 19, 2022 at 8:33 AM I really like how you approached this form, Linda. I'm finding that nearly everyone has a different way of expressing it. Linda Alice Fowler August 19, 2022 at 2:37 PM I so agree with you Milt! L Milton Hankins August 19, 2022 at 9:48 AM Yes, it does, Linda, and that is one reason why writing poetry is fun and interesting. Linda Alice Fowler August 19, 2022 at 8:40 AM Thank you Milt. I really appreciate that coming from you. I first wrote one entirely different from this, but ultimately used this one, obviously. I'm glad there is so much poetic diversity in styles. It makes it more fun for me. :) Linda

Janice Canerdy August 19, 2022 at 5:10 AM Linda, your thoughtful question-and-answer approach resulted in an excellent poem The guidelines are very challenging. I really like the last couplet. Janice Linda Alice Fowler August 19, 2022 at 8:37 AM Many thanks for the visit and supportive comment Janice! Linda