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Sense of I's and T's

Immovable object that you see? Truly not, if you allow it free. Intolerable silence you hear? Try softening your sense of fear. Impersonal, harsh touch of old love? Therapeutic caress from above. Inevitable in taste of grief? Transitioning stages for relief. Infinite smell of Autumn decay? Tumbling leaves in dull, damp, dying day.

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/23/2022 8:28:00 AM

I like the creativity in this one, Linda. It should place well in the contest. Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/23/2022 9:53:00 AM

Hi Bill my friend. Thanks for the stop by and good thoughts. Linda

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/21/2022 5:50:00 PM

So many 'IT's,' Linda. You must be in Information Technology! ~gw

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/22/2022 7:21:00 AM

Long ago...before Apples fell from the trees LOL Thanks for stopping by gw! laf

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2022 10:17:00 AM

You have solved the problems if I T lol, what a witty write, gl in the contest Linda, this is awesome :)

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/20/2022 10:25:00 AM

You are too kind my friend ;) Thanks for stopping by! Linda

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/19/2022 8:33:00 AM

I really like how you approached this form, Linda. I'm finding that nearly everyone has a different way of expressing it.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/19/2022 2:37:00 PM

I so agree with you Milt!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/19/2022 9:48:00 AM

Yes, it does, Linda, and that is one reason why writing poetry is fun and interesting.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/19/2022 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Milt. I really appreciate that coming from you. I first wrote one entirely different from this, but ultimately used this one, obviously. I'm glad there is so much poetic diversity in styles. It makes it more fun for me. :) Linda

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/19/2022 5:10:00 AM

Linda, your thoughtful question-and-answer approach resulted in an excellent poem The guidelines are very challenging. I really like the last couplet. Janice

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/19/2022 8:37:00 AM

Many thanks for the visit and supportive comment Janice! Linda