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Senryu 20220425

pets, feeding times my presence, their animation - two broods: chickens

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/26/2022 9:43:00 AM

Hello Anil - I very much liked your second line and expression. Be proud of that line Anil because it was well said and executed. As always, you make us readers think but that is a plus for all. Have a wonderful and safe night. Now the words for the day are birds and chickens... Love and Blessings always along with Shalom and Namaste (smile).

Anil Deo
Date: 4/27/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thanks and Namasthe Lisa. It is good to have a detailed comment: shalom, shalom, shalom. Healing- healing - healing, in Jesus. amen. Regards to Marie Ricci.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/26/2022 8:41:00 AM

sounds terrific!

Anil Deo
Date: 4/26/2022 8:42:00 AM

ThanX Caren K, blessings

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/25/2022 9:11:00 AM

How can man be so cruel even to steal a chicken. Pity seven died.

Anil Deo
Date: 4/26/2022 8:43:00 AM

ThanX for this support VB

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/25/2022 6:16:00 AM

I'm sure they are not for the table one day, Anil

Anil Deo
Date: 4/25/2022 6:19:00 AM

Actually, they belong to a church friend. I just love feeding & watering them. Thieves get many ... In January 7 of 9 drowned in cups of water. Foul play?