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Self Portrait of Syria

The sweet fragrance of spices Fruits ripened lush from mountain gardens The bouquets of flowers scenting the air Vivid memories of yesterday Now the flowers are black petals of death The souk reeks of burned flesh As fires from hell fell from above Those who tilled have become the earth Scorched and soiled souls, color ceases to exist In the dream world of eternal fires Hope is sucked out of you, the dead whom still walk The nomads with no eyes, lost inside timeless nightmares I am an artist, who paints with tears For those whom stories have been buried in hell fires They lay, facing the heavens, raped of their smiles Leaving Infants to cry in the night, lamenting in a sea of blood A child wanders past me, rented and soulless I take my brush and prey someone will save that one I am the invisible artist As I stab myself, my final portrait to the world

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/29/2014 9:20:00 PM
Well done - nothing light about this. Unfortunately all too true and not getting better. The editor in me note that you may want to use 'pray' rather than 'prey; in the 2nd kine of last stanza.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/29/2014 9:24:00 PM
You are hired!!!!! LOL thanks, I confess to not being very good at spelling or grammer!!! Thanks Dave!
Date: 4/21/2014 4:31:00 AM
A very, very moving piece of reality. I am empathetic to their suffering and I can relate. Beautifully written Arthur.
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Date: 4/5/2014 3:17:00 PM
A fine artist You are to paint to paint a portrait of this kind for all the world to see. Very, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/7/2014 9:41:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla, I hope you are doing well!!! In fact I pray that you are doing well.
Date: 4/5/2014 11:21:00 AM
Superb write arthur! Very well expressed and penned
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:41:00 PM
Thanks Keith!
Date: 4/5/2014 9:53:00 AM
This is beyond exceptional. I feel moved with sadness and yet through your artistry hope glimmers within the darkness.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard, appreciated!
Date: 4/5/2014 7:45:00 AM
A fantastic poem depicting the true nature of things over there but who only those that have been close enough could ever imagine the magnitude of the tragedy! Congratulations my dear Arthur for bringing up such a human topic! I have been to neighboring countries but not to Syria however living in Greece I keep track of things over there! A 7!!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:40:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios, I too have been to the area recently, its sad that there is so much suffering.
Date: 4/5/2014 6:28:00 AM
- A very relevant topic - So much pain in my heart .... how cruel the world is - Skillfully written Arthur. - Wish you a nice weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:39:00 PM
Hi there Anne Lise nice to hear from you! Thanks!!
Date: 4/5/2014 6:13:00 AM
Ohhhh... My heart breaks each time I heard the sentiments of my Syrian friends.... :( I'm with you in being against with the situation happening there.... ... With the prose, you vividly describe how things are there.... Gloomy write and somewhat a silent protest as well as a silent echoed plea to others for emphathy... -- olive_eloi who whispered a prayer for Syria
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for the lovely feedback!
Date: 4/5/2014 2:39:00 AM
Love it, so very sad
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:37:00 PM
Thanks for your kind words.
Date: 4/5/2014 12:40:00 AM
Another excellent write ....Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/5/2014 12:36:00 PM
Thank you :)

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