Self Portrait of Syria

The sweet fragrance of spices
Fruits ripened lush from mountain gardens
The bouquets of flowers scenting the air
Vivid memories of yesterday

Now the flowers are black petals of death
The souk reeks of burned flesh
As fires from hell fell from above
Those who tilled have become the earth

Scorched and soiled souls, color ceases to exist
In the dream world of eternal fires
Hope is sucked out of you, the dead whom still walk
The nomads with no eyes, lost inside timeless nightmares

I am an artist, who paints with tears
For those whom stories have been buried in hell fires
They lay, facing the heavens, raped of their smiles
Leaving Infants to cry in the night, lamenting in a sea of blood

A child wanders past me, rented and soulless
I take my brush and prey someone will save that one
I am the invisible artist
As I stab myself, my final portrait to the world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Rodgers Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Well done - nothing light about this. Unfortunately all too true and not getting better. The editor in me note that you may want to use 'pray' rather than 'prey; in the 2nd kine of last stanza.
Vaso Avatar
June 29, 2014 at 9:24 PM
You are hired!!!!! LOL thanks, I confess to not being very good at spelling or grammer!!! Thanks Dave!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 4:31 AM
A very, very moving piece of reality. I am empathetic to their suffering and I can relate. Beautifully written Arthur.
Carrillo Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 3:17 PM
A fine artist You are to paint to paint a portrait of this kind for all the world to see. Very, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 9:41 PM
Thanks Lucilla, I hope you are doing well!!! In fact I pray that you are doing well.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Superb write arthur! Very well expressed and penned
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Thanks Keith!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 7:45 AM
A fantastic poem depicting the true nature of things over there but who only those that have been close enough could ever imagine the magnitude of the tragedy! Congratulations my dear Arthur for bringing up such a human topic! I have been to neighboring countries but not to Syria however living in Greece I keep track of things over there! A 7!!!
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:40 PM
Thanks Demetrios, I too have been to the area recently, its sad that there is so much suffering.
Andresen Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 6:28 AM
- A very relevant topic - So much pain in my heart .... how cruel the world is - Skillfully written Arthur. - Wish you a nice weekend!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:39 PM
Hi there Anne Lise nice to hear from you! Thanks!!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 6:13 AM
Ohhhh... My heart breaks each time I heard the sentiments of my Syrian friends.... :( I'm with you in being against with the situation happening there.... ... With the prose, you vividly describe how things are there.... Gloomy write and somewhat a silent protest as well as a silent echoed plea to others for emphathy... -- olive_eloi who whispered a prayer for Syria
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Thanks for the lovely feedback!
Rivenbark Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 2:39 AM
Love it, so very sad
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Thanks for your kind words.
Roberts Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:40 AM
Another excellent write ....Seren
Vaso Avatar
April 5, 2014 at 12:36 PM
Thank you :)
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