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Written 29th April 2025
Self Esteem Odes Poetry contest - Sponsored by: Crystal Woods

 

 

 

One's self praise is no recommendation My mother said without hesitation If she had heard me ringing my own bell It was a lesson that I soon learned well. Whatever you do, someone does better It's a fact, my mom was my abetter Her words will stay with me all of my days Though I'm a poet, I don't expect praise. Mom also said, keep some things to yourself Words one has heard that demean someone else Hear all, see all, but don't dare spill the beans Never pour water over someone's dreams I honestly try hard to be discreet Secrets shared, to myself I'll always keep Never repeating unkind words I've heard About anyone, knowing how it hurts. If someone is in need of help, I'm there Letting them know that I truly do care Although I am growing older myself As long as I can, I'll offer my help. As for my self esteem, I'm revealing The truth of how I truly am feeling I could have done better, it is a fact But pray I'll be loved until my last act.

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Date: 4/30/2025 12:00:00 PM
Hi sister Beryl, your mum taught you well, good luck in the contest. xx
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Date: 4/29/2025 1:04:00 PM
An eloquent write love! You should be a winner in the contest! Good luck!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 2:12:00 PM
Thank dear Karen, I’ve enjoyed writing for the contest, without it the muse wouldn’t have seen light of day… Beryl
Date: 4/29/2025 11:59:00 AM
Your "Self Esteem" is a wonderful/powerful write. So True With A Great Ending... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away..................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 2:07:00 PM
Thank you Paula, those words from you are precious to me. Enjoy a poetic day too… Beryl
Date: 4/29/2025 6:52:00 AM
It's only when we get older we remember the wisdom of their words and how true they were. Best of luck in the contest Beryl. Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 9:19:00 AM
So we do Tom, I often think back to the words my mother said, alike all mothers she was simply the best… Beryl
Date: 4/29/2025 6:40:00 AM
This is really special. I am happy to be led to this today.! :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 9:13:00 AM
That’s so nice of you Heidi, your words mean a lot. Beryl :)
Date: 4/29/2025 5:49:00 AM
Very humble write Beryl. Wishing you a happy week
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Tom. Enjoy a happy week too… Beryl
Date: 4/29/2025 4:23:00 AM
Beryl this is an incredible poem…beautifully written, real and full of honesty and kindness and your mums sage advice….love it!! Deb x
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2025 4:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Deb, I’ve never forgotten those words my mom said to me, when I was young. Never thought I’d ever use her saying in a poem of mine. It’s strange how one’s mother's words come back from time to time, all I hope is that in heaven she reads these lines… Beryl x

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