Seijaku

along many roads of blessedness I’ve traveled
but also I have followed strands of pebbles
                                  on beaches of despair.
 I have crept down frightful alleys
         with my heart beating fear’s rhythm, 
                   and I have sometimes wandered
through corridors of woe.

in those spans of my lifetime
               not so very blessed
I have found relief in the comfort
              of my home, for home is where
I can lay down my burdens.

in the laughter of my children
               I have escaped the dreariness 
                                    of the mundane
I have fled the cacophony
            of everyday clamor 
                                   upon finding myself 
on the threshold of my dear home

in the sight of 
                  my loved ones’ sweet eyes,
                             I can find my tranquility, for
life’s monsters are curtailed -
                   at least for a whisper of time
                               as gentle as butterfly wings -
when I let my mind wander
                       to peaceful memories
    and calm myself inside
                          the beautiful serenity
                                         of a home free from strife
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:37 AM
Way to go with this winner. It got it just right. Congratulations. Sara K
Layne Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:59 AM
What a lovely thought! Indeed, an apt description of what a good home should provide. Congratulations on your writing!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Congrats!
Croft Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 6:30 PM
Congratulations. We truly turn to our homes for comfort.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 25, 2024 at 1:40 AM
Beautifully done and won. Love it, Andrea. Love you too. God bless you always and congrats!
Woods Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Oh yes this is so deserving of a win! I felt that peace settle over me with each line and you've expressed that feeling so vibrantly! A home as a haven is a treasure in this stressful world. Xoxo
Goldsmith Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Seijaku" write. Home is still the best place... Have a great day/weekend writing away.......................
Gasun Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:46 AM
I love this precious gem a lot. Home is the best seijaku for me too. A fave and big Congrats on your first place win my dear poet friend Andrea! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your home always. Hugs
Anaya Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 8:40 AM
"in the sight of my loved ones’ sweet eyes, I can find my tranquility" lovely dear Andrea. Congratulations on your top win! ~Anaya
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with a beautifully flowing free verse.
Empress Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 6:05 AM
Look at you getting first place in silent ones contest! Congratulations! Well deserved sweet andrea
mysore Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 5:00 AM
+FAV. 'life’s monsters are curtailed at least for a whisper of time/ as gentle as butterfly wings' beautiful write dear poet. Congratulations dear poet.
Agustin Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:37 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and your poetic talent. Your last stanza is so delightful and delighting. God bless you.
One Avatar
August 24, 2024 at 4:01 AM
I really liked the start of your poem, which portrays deep emotions through introspective prose, which many will relate to.. The ending really highlights the impact of the theme, as the stanza is soft and tender and brings some calm.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
Beaufort Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Andrea, the old sign, "There's no place like home" applies. You do wonderful things with words and express the different sides of our experience with life in a way I can relate to. Amazing how life is not all sweetness and honey, but we can at least have that sometime. Smiling.
Hind Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 11:32 AM
Glad you have your loved ones. An inspiring poem <3
Buhagiar Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 9:09 AM
It is not good to live on beaches of despair, but always strive for beautiful serenity.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 6:02 PM
Very nice! Love the first verse and your home and family as a source of peace! Hugs ~ Kim
Maverick Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 2:27 PM
May peace be upon whatever place you are Andrea.'
Narain Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 10:48 AM
Nicely penned poem.
Empress Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 8:07 AM
The ending is so delicate and so softly woven dear sweet andrea. Youv described exactly what this word and concept means in a seamless manner. Calmness amidst chaos well captured and delivered. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light. Will soup mail you about something too
May Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 6:54 AM
Home offers serenity from the stresses of the world, Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes
Kendrick Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 4:28 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Seems like there is a contest, if so, this one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K..soupmail soon.
Lawless Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 4:10 AM
Nicely written Andrea. It's been said that a house is not a home until it has been imbued with the antics of a family...
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 11:16 PM
Much as I love travelling, I love to get home, there's no place like it. Tom
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