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along many roads of blessedness I’ve traveled but also I have followed strands of pebbles on beaches of despair. I have crept down frightful alleys with my heart beating fear’s rhythm, and I have sometimes wandered through corridors of woe. in those spans of my lifetime not so very blessed I have found relief in the comfort of my home, for home is where I can lay down my burdens. in the laughter of my children I have escaped the dreariness of the mundane I have fled the cacophony of everyday clamor upon finding myself on the threshold of my dear home in the sight of my loved ones’ sweet eyes, I can find my tranquility, for life’s monsters are curtailed - at least for a whisper of time as gentle as butterfly wings - when I let my mind wander to peaceful memories and calm myself inside the beautiful serenity of a home free from strife

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Date: 3/27/2025 4:37:00 AM
Way to go with this winner. It got it just right. Congratulations. Sara K
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:59:00 AM
What a lovely thought! Indeed, an apt description of what a good home should provide. Congratulations on your writing!
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:39:00 AM
Congrats!
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Date: 8/25/2024 6:30:00 PM
Congratulations. We truly turn to our homes for comfort.
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Date: 8/25/2024 6:05:00 AM
Nice one Andrea. Our home is similarly of haven of rest and peace. Sadly, not everyone can say that
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Date: 8/25/2024 1:40:00 AM
Beautifully done and won. Love it, Andrea. Love you too. God bless you always and congrats!
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Date: 8/24/2024 12:06:00 PM
Oh yes this is so deserving of a win! I felt that peace settle over me with each line and you've expressed that feeling so vibrantly! A home as a haven is a treasure in this stressful world. Xoxo
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Date: 8/24/2024 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Seijaku" write. Home is still the best place... Have a great day/weekend writing away.......................
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:46:00 AM
I love this precious gem a lot. Home is the best seijaku for me too. A fave and big Congrats on your first place win my dear poet friend Andrea! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your home always. Hugs
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Date: 8/24/2024 8:40:00 AM
"in the sight of my loved ones’ sweet eyes, I can find my tranquility" lovely dear Andrea. Congratulations on your top win! ~Anaya
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Date: 8/24/2024 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win with a beautifully flowing free verse.
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Date: 8/24/2024 6:05:00 AM
Look at you getting first place in silent ones contest! Congratulations! Well deserved sweet andrea
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Date: 8/24/2024 5:00:00 AM
+FAV. 'life’s monsters are curtailed at least for a whisper of time/ as gentle as butterfly wings' beautiful write dear poet. Congratulations dear poet.
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:37:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and your poetic talent. Your last stanza is so delightful and delighting. God bless you.
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Date: 8/24/2024 4:01:00 AM
I really liked the start of your poem, which portrays deep emotions through introspective prose, which many will relate to.. The ending really highlights the impact of the theme, as the stanza is soft and tender and brings some calm.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest.
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Date: 8/9/2024 2:30:00 PM
Andrea, the old sign, "There's no place like home" applies. You do wonderful things with words and express the different sides of our experience with life in a way I can relate to. Amazing how life is not all sweetness and honey, but we can at least have that sometime. Smiling.
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Date: 8/7/2024 11:32:00 AM
Glad you have your loved ones. An inspiring poem <3
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Date: 8/7/2024 9:09:00 AM
It is not good to live on beaches of despair, but always strive for beautiful serenity.
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Date: 8/6/2024 6:02:00 PM
Very nice! Love the first verse and your home and family as a source of peace! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 8/6/2024 2:27:00 PM
May peace be upon whatever place you are Andrea.'
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Date: 8/6/2024 10:48:00 AM
Nicely penned poem.
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Date: 8/6/2024 8:07:00 AM
The ending is so delicate and so softly woven dear sweet andrea. Youv described exactly what this word and concept means in a seamless manner. Calmness amidst chaos well captured and delivered. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light. Will soup mail you about something too
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Date: 8/6/2024 6:54:00 AM
Home offers serenity from the stresses of the world, Very nicely penned Andrea, best wishes
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Date: 8/6/2024 4:28:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Seems like there is a contest, if so, this one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K..soupmail soon.
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Date: 8/6/2024 4:10:00 AM
Nicely written Andrea. It's been said that a house is not a home until it has been imbued with the antics of a family...
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