Seeking the Answer -Miltonic Sonnet

The shadows creep and faintly in the sky,
stars begin to come to us with gentle light.
And once more our fancy doth take flight
with man's eternal question " oh God, why?
What place have we when then we die,
railing against the unknown we still fight.
Often that query comes unbidden in the night
as the time of our mortality marches nigh.
Now into the  depths of sky man sails
on wings of faith, answers cloaked in mystery.
We beat our breast in anguish, try to understand
the plan that lurks there behind the starry veil.
And so it has been given through all history
that perhaps answers are written only in shifting sand...

4/18/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/15/2014 4:04:00 AM
Barbara, this is inspired. Congratulations on your well deserved placing. fav.
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Date: 5/14/2014 5:48:00 AM
Dear LNC, A sad, but beautifully written poem, Barbara. It seems that many people fear what lies "behind the starry veil." Those who believe in an afterlife have nothing to fear, dear. Still, people waste too much time afraid of the unknown, when they should be enjoying their earthly existence knowing that heaven waits for all. Congratulations on your win, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/13/2014 11:46:00 PM
there seem to be more questions then answers Barbara. but you ask pertinent ones. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:03:00 PM
Great write and win BG...congrats
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:40:00 PM
Well done! Congratulations, Barbara.
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Date: 5/13/2014 3:12:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations, Barbara.
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:41:00 PM
All the questions that have plagued each mortal since the beginning of time! You have penned so well, Barbara! Congratulations on a profound poem!
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:15:00 PM
Way to go with a great winning work..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:11:00 PM
NICE ONE.... PD
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Date: 5/13/2014 12:37:00 PM
I love the ending, Barbara. Wonderful thought evoking Miltonic sonnet. Congrat's. Lainie
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:49:00 AM
Very beautifully written, Barbara! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/13/2014 9:19:00 AM
Simply awesome Barbara,, a wonderful write as ever ! Deep write , ur words r written in marble here unlike the answers in shifting sand! Congrats on great win !
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/13/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thank you so much. Your one of 2 who liked it...lol.
Date: 4/30/2014 7:59:00 AM
I'm trying one of these Miltonic sonnets for the first time, Barbara. Yours is great!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 4/30/2014 8:02:00 AM
Good luck, this took me a week...lol. These complicated forms are a real trial at times. BG
Date: 4/20/2014 3:59:00 PM
Magical, great write! Happy Easter!
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Date: 4/19/2014 11:43:00 PM
Very deeply and persuasively written, Barbara. We steadily and consistently underestimate the challenges facing us and overestimate our ability to deal with them. Above all our hubris blinds us concerning the most important reality of all: the existence of that which is greater than ourselves. My faith in such faith sustains me.
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Date: 4/18/2014 11:04:00 PM
Your sonnet is simply wonderful Barbara.. I loved the imagery in your lines: "Now into the depths of sky man sails on wings of faith". A challenging form written so well!
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Date: 4/18/2014 9:02:00 PM
Wow. I like this very much. A great write in the Miltonic sonnet. Cheers for you Barbara.
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Date: 4/18/2014 4:39:00 PM
from sky to sand the answer still alludes us
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