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Seeker of the Night

Blood and chills ran through my veins that day as I recall Although a summer’s eve, there was an eerie mist of fall Approaching that old house, I had seen no one at the gate A new employ, I had been charged with selling that estate In disrepair, the creaky door had opened just for me So I walked in and wandered as I put away my key Yes, I’d heard the rumors and the tales of small town lore The creatures of the night and such for me were just a bore I walked around and made a list of work yet to be done Cobwebs fused the threadbare drapes to block out all the sun It’s then I turned to see what caught the corner of my eye A figure in a gown with long black hair who said “Goodbye” Before I knew what overcame to hold my wits in check I felt her kiss of evil as she plunged into my neck Forever now to tread these halls I’ll never see the light For that’s the day that I became a seeker of the night

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Date: 10/16/2021 8:53:00 PM
Chills, thrills and spills, Sir Michael. Whoa, Nellie! ~ Gershon's been Goblined
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/17/2021 5:35:00 AM
That you have sir! You deserve some candy !!
Date: 10/16/2021 5:01:00 PM
ooh you gave me goosebumps Mike. excellent story telling:-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 6:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan xxoo
Date: 10/16/2021 3:11:00 PM
Damn, how haunting is this and so creepy also... perfectly timed for this time of the year..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 6:54:00 PM
Thank you Silent One, I’m so glad you liked it!!
Date: 10/16/2021 1:00:00 PM
Intriguing story, Mike--seeker of the night. Great write--apt for the season.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 3:10:00 PM
Thank you Vijay !
Date: 10/16/2021 12:16:00 PM
- A wonderful poem with chills and goosebumps, Mike - Have a lovely weekend ... take care - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise and a happy weekend to you as well xxoo
Date: 10/16/2021 9:31:00 AM
Oh, wow! What a marvelous Halloween story. I can hear this being read around a campfire. Wonderful writing, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much Milton !!
Date: 10/16/2021 6:12:00 AM
Mike, wonderful and scary, I loved your poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Mike Gentile
Date: 10/16/2021 7:12:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance !!!

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