Seeds of Tomorrow

Cattails scatter their down across my path They try in vain to hang on Winds spread next years glory

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Malcolm Dyer

Date: 11/19/2009 9:14:00 PM

My first Kimo poem I love poetry in all its form thanks for reading my poem you are pretty good

Marty Owens

Date: 11/18/2009 9:56:00 PM

Love this too...enjoyed...Marty

Laurie Ginn

Date: 11/18/2009 4:11:00 PM

I'd much rather see the wind spreading cattails than dandelions. Nice job BG

James Fraser

Date: 11/18/2009 11:52:00 AM

Wonderful Kimo Barbara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2009 6:07:00 PM

Intereresting write BG and imagery grand.. Kimo is a form of poetry I am still learning about as well as Haiku... thankxxx for your sharing and your expertise' .... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"