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Entwined hearts beating as one reaching out Under a perfect seductive midnight Drawn to the beguiling stars all about Obscured by drifting clouds dance and delight Moon stepped from the shadows and advanced her Noble grace weaving silver beams and lace Round Venus , Pluto, Mars, and Jupiter Threading them up in her whimsy embrace Entrancing night under the Milky Way Stretching across the sky with enchantment Vast and mysterious place always stays Unchanged shining embracing the planet Enthralled by ethereal glow of stars Orbiting round and round that once was ours 5/9/2017

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Date: 5/19/2017 2:57:00 PM
Seductive, enchanting and beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement on such a short list of winners! 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/19/2017 6:33:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic and playful Eve.
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Date: 5/19/2017 4:16:00 AM
And what a seductive sky! Congrats, Eve!
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Date: 5/15/2017 11:24:00 AM
Superb final couplet after an excellent body. This was a tough list of words to fit into a sonnet, I like how you maneuvered it, ethereal glow and all.
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Date: 5/11/2017 11:36:00 AM
Night has a seductive will of its own, Eve, and you bring to the fore its entrancing power and beauty in this lovely sonnet! Good luck & Hugs ~ paul
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Date: 5/10/2017 8:03:00 AM
Nothing more seductive than the moon and stars when two people are in love. Been a while since I've seen the Milky Way. Loved your sonnet, Mrs Eve:)
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Date: 5/10/2017 7:17:00 AM
Beautifully written Eve. A nice poetic journey through the universe.
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Date: 5/10/2017 2:36:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Eve - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/10/2017 12:28:00 AM
You have done a wonderful job here, Eve! Best of luck to you
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Date: 5/9/2017 11:38:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet Eve, you just keep getting better and better!!! Hugs!
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