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Close my eyes and dream
     lovely visions in the night
          of us in sensual play.
Kisses sweet as cream
     make my beating heart take flight,
          fly until the break of day.

Then my dream lives on.
     My lover awakes with me.
          Sometimes sweet dreams do come true.
At the break of dawn,
     in life's bare reality,
          my visions came into view.



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January 4th, 2016
Modern Sedoka
Sponsor: Laura Loo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/28/2016 9:04:00 PM
Lin, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA
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Date: 1/25/2016 1:13:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go..Enjoyed reading it today..Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/25/2016 1:21:00 PM
Aw, thank you so much...and thanks for reading me.
Date: 1/22/2016 6:32:00 AM
This a beautiful write, Lin. I'm glad to have read it (missed it earlier). This one goes to fave's +A7. Congratulations on your well deserved win in the contest. -hugs- T.J
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/22/2016 6:50:00 AM
Oh, T.J, how very sweet of you. ~ Thanks and hugs ya back
Date: 1/20/2016 3:26:00 PM
Congrats, Lin. This is such a beautiful poem on so many different levels. Every time I read it I see or hear or feel something different. Nicely done!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2016 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dan.
Date: 1/19/2016 3:50:00 PM
I really like yours. so soft and romantic. Congrats on a great win.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/20/2016 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 1/18/2016 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/19/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. I've been away, so sorry this is late.
Date: 1/18/2016 10:30:00 AM
LIN, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:56:00 AM
Lin, congrats on your top placement in my contest :) Many thank you for being a part of it *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/9/2016 10:08:00 AM
I love this, Lin ... CayCay
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:59:00 AM
A fantastic SEDOKA Lin! Beautifully laid out with perfect rhyming and gorgeous sentiment. BRAVO my dear! Best wishes, Keith
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2016 6:05:00 AM
Thank you SO very much, Keith.
Date: 1/4/2016 4:00:00 PM
very well done, Lin!! nice and romantic.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/5/2016 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, Andrea.
Date: 1/4/2016 1:17:00 PM
A delightful rhyme Lin good luck in the contest - not a form I have tried before so I need to get my thinking cap on:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/4/2016 1:25:00 PM
Oh me too I have so much to learn:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/4/2016 1:22:00 PM
Thanks, and you'll do just fine. It's a fun form. There are sooooo very many I've yet to try. ;)