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Smaller rock suspended On high between Two mountainous boulders Firmly fitted secure Earth shakes Bolders feel the force Oh! Rock can you endure

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Date: 9/22/2009 4:22:00 PM
nicely done
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Date: 9/22/2009 8:24:00 AM
Cool poem Sara, I could come up with an analogy here, but don't know if that's what you intended! Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/22/2009 3:41:00 AM
Kool poem Sara, i can picture this completely>>James
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