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Second Chance

fresh morning blooms reflecting dew's light is your love still aflame? ~ noontime fades off to gather day's mist am I like the sunset? ~ when night counts stars as roads grow empty will our hearts touch one moon? ~ and rainfall drips cleansing panes of glass is this love's second chance? Questionku Two Contest For Richard Lamoureaux 21 Oct 2015

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Date: 11/1/2015 11:02:00 AM
lovely poem....:) love and peace
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:24:00 AM
Very lovely and moving, Nette. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/26/2015 1:03:00 AM
I always find that your pieces are capable of soothing a savage brow, Nette, and you never disappoint. Jolly well done, young lady. Viv x
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Date: 10/25/2015 9:38:00 PM
I like how this is modular and the freedom it gives the reader. Excellent and congrats.
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Date: 10/25/2015 7:59:00 PM
I live for second chances, congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 10/25/2015 6:31:00 PM
Congratulations in your win.
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Date: 10/25/2015 5:17:00 PM
Loved yours. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:25:00 PM
absolutely beautiful Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/25/2015 3:14:00 PM
Beautiful, Nette - Congratulations! CayCay
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:35:00 PM
Gorgeous, I had a feeling this was yours. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:23:00 PM
nette excellent win!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:13:00 PM
these are beautiful. I especially liked the last two!
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Date: 10/21/2015 5:23:00 PM
Stunning
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Date: 10/21/2015 1:37:00 PM
Very, Very nice, Nette! I find your poem completely captivating...Simply enchanting!! My very best regards, Nette! :) john
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Date: 10/21/2015 9:25:00 AM
Wow. Does it have to be a string of 'qu, Nette? I did only one. huggs!
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:26:00 AM
Dropped by to tell you how moving are your thoughts--innocent and deep. Top seller of a poem!
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Date: 10/21/2015 2:11:00 AM
Yours is lovely, nette, you can take any form and wrap it in silk. Good luck in the contest. Viv x
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