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Seaweeds

eddying currents in its churning funnel face weeds swirl quivering

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2024 10:28:00 AM

Creative work. I don't remember seeing seaweeds when I have been at the beach except once when they were all churned up and floating on the surface of the water. Of course, I have seen them on TV on some nature shows. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/7/2022 11:31:00 AM

Hello Valsa, I have been told that some people do eat the seaweed. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2022 6:26:00 AM

Hello Valsa, I do not know either. I would not eat it. Blessings my friend.

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:28:00 PM

That I don't know ! Man weeds may have iodine content in them. Thanks a lot Darlene !

Bill Baker

Date: 1/6/2022 4:59:00 PM

There's comfort in the peace of a natural scene. You've presented this one well and made it feel real as I read. Smiles ~ Blessing my friend, Bill

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:27:00 PM

Very happy for your nice comment Bill . There is always beauty in a natural scene.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/6/2022 4:03:00 PM

Well-captured write about what I call 'Spinach of the Sea.' ~ Popeye

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:25:00 PM

Yes, weeds are spinach of the sea.... like that usage ! Thanks dear Gershon !

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/6/2022 1:07:00 PM

A beautiful image of the seashore Valsa, can't wait to get back to the beach. Tom

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:24:00 PM

A visit to the beach is always so relaxing. Have a great week end Tom

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/6/2022 9:41:00 AM

Valsa, you've written a fantastic haiku. Every sentence evokes pictures in my mind; it's a very evocative piece.

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:23:00 PM

You are a master of haiku. So this comment from you for my experimental haiku is regarded as a trophy for me. Thanks a lot, dear friend !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/6/2022 5:41:00 AM

I see the images in every line--wonderfully descriptive, Valsa.

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:21:00 PM

I feel elated ! Thanks a lot Vijay!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/6/2022 4:29:00 AM

A busy scene - natural art. Love it, Valsa!

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:20:00 PM

Thanks a lot Kim !

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/6/2022 3:14:00 AM

I love the ocean -- great, living visual, alive with motion and sensitivity. Well done!

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:19:00 PM

Even I love it and enjoys the dashing waves and the foamy wavelets and even the weeds thrown on the beach . Thank you so much Joe.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/6/2022 1:09:00 AM

Who would think of writing about weeds on the sea bed? I often saw them of course but my muse is limited. Great Haiku.

Valsa George
Date: 1/7/2022 11:17:00 PM

Thank you dear Victor for your encouraging response !