Seaweeds

eddying currents
in its churning funnel face
weeds swirl quivering

beachmetaphorseahaiku

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Sara Kendrick

August 16, 2024 at 10:28 AM

Creative work. I don't remember seeing seaweeds when I have been at the beach except once when they were all churned up and floating on the surface of the water. Of course, I have seen them on TV on some nature shows. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 7, 2022 at 11:31 AM

Hello Valsa, I have been told that some people do eat the seaweed. Blessings my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu

January 8, 2022 at 6:26 AM

Hello Valsa, I do not know either. I would not eat it. Blessings my friend.

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:28 PM

That I don't know ! Man weeds may have iodine content in them. Thanks a lot Darlene !

Bill Baker

January 6, 2022 at 4:59 PM

There's comfort in the peace of a natural scene. You've presented this one well and made it feel real as I read. Smiles ~ Blessing my friend, Bill

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:27 PM

Very happy for your nice comment Bill . There is always beauty in a natural scene.

Gershon Wolf

January 6, 2022 at 4:03 PM

Well-captured write about what I call 'Spinach of the Sea.' ~ Popeye

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:25 PM

Yes, weeds are spinach of the sea.... like that usage ! Thanks dear Gershon !

Tom Cunningham

January 6, 2022 at 1:07 PM

A beautiful image of the seashore Valsa, can't wait to get back to the beach. Tom

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:24 PM

A visit to the beach is always so relaxing. Have a great week end Tom

Sotto Poet

January 6, 2022 at 9:41 AM

Valsa, you've written a fantastic haiku. Every sentence evokes pictures in my mind; it's a very evocative piece.

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:23 PM

You are a master of haiku. So this comment from you for my experimental haiku is regarded as a trophy for me. Thanks a lot, dear friend !

Vijay Pandit

January 6, 2022 at 5:41 AM

I see the images in every line--wonderfully descriptive, Valsa.

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:21 PM

I feel elated ! Thanks a lot Vijay!

Kim Rodrigues

January 6, 2022 at 4:29 AM

A busy scene - natural art. Love it, Valsa!

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:20 PM

Thanks a lot Kim !

Joseph P. DiMino

January 6, 2022 at 3:14 AM

I love the ocean -- great, living visual, alive with motion and sensitivity. Well done!

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:19 PM

Even I love it and enjoys the dashing waves and the foamy wavelets and even the weeds thrown on the beach . Thank you so much Joe.

Victor Buhagiar

January 6, 2022 at 1:09 AM

Who would think of writing about weeds on the sea bed? I often saw them of course but my muse is limited. Great Haiku.

Valsa George

January 7, 2022 at 11:17 PM

Thank you dear Victor for your encouraging response !

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