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About grief..

Inspired by the prompt " winter's slumber" contest sponsored by Regina Mcintosh.

 

When nature wilts into a colorless haven, metaphors of death sprout from timeless roots~ easing through relentless gales of grief. Like the lulling of nocturnal nightingales, nestled in nests of hibernating serenades.. Life is a p o e m framed in f l o a t i n g memories~ hung behind a vintage scarf of vanilla f l a s h b a c k s Every rhyme swiftly evaporates into paper-cut sunsets, while the first flake of frost resembles the depth of grief we home~ divine light of the creator seeps in amidst mourning rainbows, comforting the greying dawn dressed with seasonal s i l e n c e I am a sunken s e a lily drifting along a glacial lake of lament, finding solace in faith that flickers through sapphires~ scattered as a glimmer of hope across arctic skies… And when the last ray of gold wanes into a hushed slumber, my onyx ink bleeds coral lines in glows of gloaming, chasing bed-shaped clouds that purge mauve mists upon porcelain fields, cloaked in crystal clear tears of yesterday’s chaos. I hear sullen symphonies echoing from the sandalwood essence of death, composed in refined refrains across rhythmic ruffles of wintry rivers. Sometimes, moon-soaked memoirs enclasped in silver credence, reflect the final embrace with familiar fragrances, like souvenirs of l o s s while time keeps ticking within a snow-globe of frozen heartbeats, flaming colors of change keep cruising through the seascape of misery. But, between the bittersweet blizzards of fragmented dreams, I find peace, in the aftermath of heavy rainfalls. The euphonious tune of nature, has a way of reminding all that which breathes, that a winter slumber, is an eternal ethereal plan, to reunite spirits in a seraphic sanctuary above doleful darkness that suffocates blistered skin of wounded willows. So tonight, as diamond flurries come s w i r l i n g through the wispy wind, let these ice-melting letters t w i r l before funeral carols, waltzing to the whirlwinds of demise, as an evergreen epitaph engraved on the tombstones of tomorrow. For, I will wrap trembling torment in a cosmic blanket of baptized bliss, stitched with leafy remnants from weathered gardens.

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Date: 1/8/2024 7:58:00 AM
Another brilliant poem! Congratulations on your placement dear Inky!
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:58:00 AM
Just beautiful. Love it so. Congrats and God bless you always. love, Gina
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Date: 1/6/2024 10:21:00 PM
Gorgeous and golden writing, Ink! You know I always think so highly of your work! <3
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:24:00 AM
stunning Ink what a beautiful poem gl in contest hugs Shadow
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Date: 1/4/2024 9:17:00 PM
My gosh!!! This is a glorious poem my dear Ink Empress.. You've captured a beautifully mesmeric winter ambience whilst conveying such poignant emotions of vulnerability and fragility here..This poem dwells deep in the sense of loss and conveys how the world turns cold and bitter throughout the seasons of heart and our souls shiver due to the chilly brisks of melancholy..I can't help but relate so deeply and evocatively with this magnificent write..I personally don't like winter much as it brings
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 1/4/2024 9:22:00 PM
gloominess for my heart.. I'm flabbergasted by many lines here but those that compelled me so much were "I am a sunken sea lily drifting along a glacial lake of lament", "vintage scarf of vanilla flashbacks", "snow-globe of frozen heartbeats", "diamond flurries come swirling through the wispy wind, let these ice-melting letters twirl before funeral carols" Sigh.. That's painstaking and heart-wrenching.. I can feel those emotions that weave themselves from ruins, behind these lines.. And that ending is extremely profound.. This is definitely going in my FAVs.. Best of luck to you for the contest, my dear, keep writing and shining!
Date: 1/4/2024 2:38:00 PM
You have a special way, dear Ink, a brilliant ability of expressing grief so eloquently. Your poem was full of lovely metaphors and alliterations. Gosh where do I begin...there's so much to love about this poem. I especially liked: while time keeps ticking within a snow-globe of frozen heartbeats'--such a powerful image. This is a masterpiece for sure. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 1/4/2024 1:55:00 PM
A stunning write, as always, Ink---aptly descriptive of winter's slumber in metaphors --nocturnal nightingales, nestled in nests of hibernating serenades---mourning rainbows---cloaked in crystal clear tears of yesterday’s chaos--- WOW again and a FAVE!
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Date: 1/4/2024 1:13:00 PM
Poignant phrase: "Every rhyme swiftly evaporates into paper-cut sunsets, while the first flake of frost resembles the depth of grief we home~ " -- the entire poem a remarkable meditation, on joy and the counterweight of grief. Our DNA bear both. "So tonight, as diamond flurries come swirling through the wispy wind, let these ice-melting letters twirl before funeral carols, waltzing to the whirlwinds of demise, as an evergreen epitaph" -- Brilliant! Perfect!
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:34:00 PM
Wow..the way you weave grief into such a hauntingly breathtaking piece has my heart in pieces..feeling your words so deeply, my beautiful soul sis, as I’m going through a sort of grief myself. I love how your poems reach so many hearts and souls feeling a different or same kind of grief..for your words truly brings comfort and solace and like a breath of fresh air to those reading and feeling this masterpiece! You are, as I always say, walking, talking and breathing human poetry with a deep and
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:36:00 PM
And poetic soul unmatched! So flawlessly woven, bringing out the emotions, making one feel such depth and rawness as they drown in your words of unimaginable beauty! The imagery always hits me deep within and I find myself swimming in the grace and emotion inducing way you ink, my beautiful soul sis..I am truly amazed with your brilliance! Star-struck through and through!
Date: 1/4/2024 12:23:00 PM
Winter, this year, seems much like your poem. It can't be hurried. I love the futuristic rhythm of this poem. It slides smoothly from each paragraph like melted caramel.
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Date: 1/4/2024 12:15:00 PM
Once again very descriptive lines penned in this one. Diamond flurries seem so cold but there is a certain silence when they fall unless there is the howling of the wind. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your presence at my page. Sara K
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Date: 1/4/2024 11:13:00 AM
Hey Inky.. Your poem is a poignant and evocative exploration of the cyclical nature of life and the profound beauty found within the depths of grief and angst and how we can feel lost in this world.. The imagery in this poem is truly striking, from the colourless haven of wilting nature to the metaphors of death sprouting from timeless roots. The vivid descriptions, such as the lulling of nocturnal nightingales and the vintage scarf of vanilla flashbacks, create rich emotions and visuals...
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Date: 1/4/2024 11:13:00 AM
The closing lines, with diamond flurries swirling through the wispy wind and the poet wrapping trembling torment in a cosmic blanket of bliss, provide a sense of closure. The expressive language and vivid imagery bring the poem to a powerful and introspective end.... I hope you entered it in the contest dear..
Date: 1/4/2024 10:58:00 AM
Dearest Inky, once again I am mesmerized and awestruck by your poetic brilliance, your imagery that is beyond creative (too many to mention!), and your ability to take every human emotion and craft it into unforgettable poetry! Wow! and WOW! This poem runs the gamut of emotions but underlying your journey into the depths of emotion is a heart that seeks to console others with a vision of a holy sanctuary! Beautiful cannot fully describe the wonder of your words! Thank you! Blessings! Fav!
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Date: 1/4/2024 9:47:00 AM
What a truly remarkable and uplifting poem, dear Ink! You possess remarkable selflessness and genuine concern for others, making you a true poet. The heartfelt imagery within your words is truly inspiring, and it is astonishing how many profound images you have managed to create. I found myself reading certain lines multiple times, simply to fully grasp and appreciate their depth and beauty. There are truly too many lines within this poem that I thoroughly admire. THIS IS A FAVE.
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Date: 1/4/2024 9:28:00 AM
The opening lines are tooo enchanting!!! Cnt pick a fav line.. paper-cut sunsets, while the first flake of frost.. comforting the greying dawn dressed with seasonal silence.. mmm the way u making elements move !! Heart melting!! onyx ink bleeds coral lines..bed-shaped clouds that purge mauve mists upon porcelain fields, cloaked in crystal clear tears of yesterday’s chaos… euphonious tune of nature,..ur words make me float!!! Waaay too many lines here that I am in love with … gorgeous piece!!
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:58:00 AM
Your inspiration is of the highest level. So many images I had to read them twice to appreciate it more.
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:00:00 AM
This is deeply emotive … you have expressed so well .
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