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Searching

Cascades of sunlight
Reach down for its dark secrets 
The forest primeval



For Raul's contest

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:58:00 PM

This is lovely and congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” poetry contest with this lovely haiku. Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/26/2009 11:29:00 AM

I really like everything about this haiku and how the title ties in perfectly. Congratulations on your placement in the contest!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2009 12:23:00 PM

congrats on the placement in the contest!!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2009 12:22:00 PM

congrats on the placement in the contest!!

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:20:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Barbara, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/24/2009 3:48:00 PM

Dear Barbara Jean, Congratulations YOU are on a roll with YOUR Writting "Searching" a well deserved Winin Raul's Contest I am Proud of YOU LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG

Date: 11/24/2009 3:07:00 PM

What a creative view. Love the opening line. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 4:04:00 AM

ENCHANTING HAIKU, BARBARA. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST, AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR CONTINUED SUPPORT AND ENCOURAGEMENT WITH YOUR KIND COMMENTS. LOVE, LAINIE

Brian Strand

Date: 11/24/2009 3:48:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest BG.Rgds Brian

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 11/23/2009 11:23:00 PM

Congrats, Barbara, on your placing in Raul's contest! This was definitely high on my list of favorite entries! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:51:00 PM

Congrats, BG, on your winning poem in Raul's contest ... this is a nice habit don't u think? well deserved winning poem .. blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:40:00 PM

BG, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/21/2009 7:49:00 AM

Brilliant imagery, Barbara! I love the way you look at the world through your poetry. Happy Thanksgiving! Love, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 11/18/2009 9:55:00 PM

Your Haiku is beautiful too...it's so interesting the different meanings from different people and approaches they take . Good luck in the contest...Marty

James Fraser

Date: 11/18/2009 11:54:00 AM

Lovely Haiku Barbara >> James

Donna Golden

Date: 11/18/2009 11:18:00 AM

Wonderful haiku, Barbara! Thanks for the light you bring to my day with your writing. Hugs, Donna

Brian Strand

Date: 11/18/2009 1:02:00 AM

thank you BG for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian

Lena Townsend

Date: 11/18/2009 12:19:00 AM

Good luck to you in Raul's contest though from this skilled write I know luck is not needed. You captured the picture well and painted it with words. Smiles from Lolita

Ronald Bingham

Date: 11/17/2009 7:49:00 PM

Barbara, first off thanks a bunch for your comment, greatly appreciated. Great Haiku, some say they are simple to write. I can't get said what I need to say in that few a lines, but you seem to have done it without any problem. Good luck in Raul's contest, another fine souper. God Bless my friend. Ron