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Sea of Roses

My muse, a sea of weeping roses, free-flowing in tune with smoky frequencies, as storms of fear rest in the heart of a sunken canvas. I ponder~ why does the blue of the ocean roar like wrathful thunder? Why does the sun bleed searing sins? Perhaps it is in the way the earth rests in untouchable s i l e n c e, watching the trembling twigs of tormented trees, tasting the toxic tints of life, while ink still questions… Can you hear my heartbeat? I am the fragrant feather of an untamed spirit, still sprinkling stars in metallic gold across fading colors of hope, for I still see unlocked gardens above fogs of melancholy, to walk above clouds of velvety wishes. I care not for a remedy to seal these screaming s c a r s within callous crevices of narcissistic cliffs. I long to be the moon amidst the horizon that refuses to unveil the majestic crown of crystalline compassion. But what if I am an echo of a forgotten dream? Would you still love me when confused by the moving minutes, as the last petal falls~ tangled in thistles of time? Tired is this heart that aches but refuses to break, as I am more than a fleeting thought, a breathing souvenir of yesterday’s twilight… Now… I am your s k y a cradle of immortal l o v e.... surfing against the lachrymose gusts~ I dived into the cauldron of magic potion and curated a eucalyptus elixir to calm the sorrows you home, when dusk collides with doleful dawn, allowing my quill to collaborate with crimson cues of frankincense clarity.

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Date: 2/9/2025 8:22:00 AM
Back with heartfelt congratulations on your outstanding win dearest Ink. Warm hugs and vivid vibes on your way
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Date: 2/8/2025 6:51:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Ink, I love your poetic style… Beryl
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear beryl, so grateful for your support
Date: 2/8/2025 10:19:00 AM
I was happily chomping through some tabbouleh, reading the poem and liking it, then I got to "still see unlocked gardens above fogs of melancholy" and stopped eating and felt every word from there on in. Your mentions of the moon felt especially powerful. Then "a fleeting thought, a breathing souvenir" hit hard. I think this poem is unbeatable. I need to chew again now lol
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:53:00 AM
Hahah awwn thank you so much!!! You are so funny!!!!
Date: 2/8/2025 8:43:00 AM
This is brilliant, Ink:) I am baffled by your imagery:)
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:54:00 AM
Awn thank you dear joanna so much
Date: 2/7/2025 10:04:00 PM
Ahhh , my friend, this is again not poetry, but a magic elixir flowing from your pen. Your resilience, interspersed by emotions of hurt, disappointment, the toxicity of life, all so beautifully delineated in striking metaphors and in highly alliterative verse, your all time forte! 'crown of crystalline compassion, 'tangled in thistles of time', 'callous crevices of narcissistic cliffs'..... are a few examples. "Tired is this heart that aches but refuses to break," Can't break ! Oh, never break!
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Date: 2/7/2025 4:36:00 AM
Dear Empress, Ahhh....your words flow like a sacred hymn, with each line a brushstroke on the soul’s canvas. I could actually feel the depth of longing, the ache of memory, and the quiet strength inked through your verses for they create something beyond poetry. It is felt, lived, and breathed. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:21:00 PM
As is your wont, you describe a vivid picture portraying emotions and inspiration interspersed with nature. This is a fabulous poem.
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:27:00 PM
Thank you so much dear victor appreciate your kindness always
Date: 2/6/2025 10:51:00 PM
‘ I long to be the moon amidst the horizon that refuses to unveil the majestic crown of crystalline compassion’… but you are the moon and everything more! What a wonderful poem! ‘ a cradle of immortal l o v e’… your words dance so well with each other. Very enjoyable read.
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:30:00 PM
Thank you for quoting your favorite lines and for your thoughtful response! Grateful for your kindness
Date: 2/6/2025 9:12:00 PM
I would gladly spend time sitting inside each image your pen invoked. If anyone started the read with a light heart and ended it feeling the same, then they didn't feel-read it. Because it delivers, it deserves a reader's time. Both my pen and I are stirred up in quite a poetically rich way . I'm dizzy ... CayCay
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:33:00 PM
So thoughtful and kind thank you so very much dear cay cay. Appreciate your support
Date: 2/6/2025 8:46:00 PM
"...I still see unlocked gardens above fogs of melancholy to walk above clouds of velvety wishes"-ability to find beauty and hope amidst sadness, impressive.
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Date: 2/6/2025 11:41:00 PM
Ah thank you so much truly always
Date: 2/6/2025 8:41:00 PM
This is so much warrior...powerful writing, dear Ink. You know I always enjoy your work.
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:11:00 AM
Thank you so much dear sweet paige good to see u back
Date: 2/6/2025 7:10:00 PM
Another wowser, Ink. Which contest might this one be for? I am always amazed by your vocabulary and how easily cool phrases ooze from your pen!!
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:15:00 AM
For brians! Hah! And i also used a line from this poem as my new contest prompt so it is that… now i changed the title to that… thank u sweet andrea
Date: 2/6/2025 3:16:00 PM
Delightful poetry, dearest Ink, delves into the intricacies of feeling, especially loss, yearning, and the pursuit of belonging and comprehension. As it delves into the depths of emotion and the challenges of life, it ponders the muse's relationship with the poet. The vivid images and intense feelings conveyed by your choice of words are powerful. "Weeping roses," "smoky frequencies," and "lachrymose gusts" evoke a sense of smell, sight, and sound in the reader. Poems like "bleed searing sins" and "fragrant feather," which employ opposing imagery, enrich the emotional terrain.
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Date: 2/7/2025 1:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much always for such detailed comments, grateful for your kind support
Date: 2/6/2025 9:23:00 AM
IE, seems like in the end you have it all under control. The recipient of your positive feeling must be very fortunate! Yet there’s more universal themes and interplay here. The depth of images and thoughts could personify a goddess or even Mother Nature herself. The amplitude of changing thoughts and perceptions makes reading this all the more fun! Smiles.
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Date: 2/6/2025 8:32:00 AM
"a sea of weeping roses, free-flowing in tune with smoky frequencies," -- great opening! I'm hooked, need to read more. "why does the blue of the ocean roar like wrathful thunder? Why does the sun bleed searing sins? Perhaps it is in the way the earth rests in untouchable s i l e n c e," -- you ask the question, and then answer it marvelously for all of us. To be alive, to feel the world, is to be a sea of endless horizons, limitless, emotional climactic climbs. Wonderful writing. Inspiring.
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Date: 2/6/2025 2:22:00 AM
- No matter how dark life may be...there will always be unlocked gardens and clouds of velvety desires, Ink - A deep and wonderful poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/6/2025 6:55:00 AM
Thank you dear anne lise always for your kind support
Date: 2/6/2025 12:56:00 AM
a sea of weeping roses, free-flowing in tune with smoky frequencies, oooo the imagary… blue of the ocean roar like wrathful thunder… ooo damn papi!!! sun bleed searing sins…That’s sexaaay!! trembling twigs of tormented trees, tasting the toxic tints of life,. Oooo yesss come thruuuu the alliterations gone wiiild .. Would you still love me when confused by the moving minutes, tangled in thistles of time?.. I could drowning in dementors n I’ll still love u papii!!! I am your sky … oh yes u r!!! U tell em papi!!!! Mmmm that’s ma girrrl! a cradle of immortal love mmmmmm... the flow the emtions the depth in this piece is absolutely stunning papi!!! Gorgeous!!!
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Date: 2/6/2025 1:04:00 AM
Nah u dont love me papi! U forsaken me lolol
Date: 2/6/2025 12:30:00 AM
Very deep and love it
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Date: 2/6/2025 1:04:00 AM
Love u

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