Sea of Amber Grain

Outside the balmy gust of wind tussle
the prairie grasses and whips the horse's
mane. They journeyed, horse and rider, muscle
pulling like ships sailing on their courses. 

Through the sea of golden statuesque wheat,
a fresh, clean, sunny smell, silage or new
dried fodder stored for the livestock to eat.
Pleased to remember the touch of dawns dew.

Remembering days, jingling spur tensions,
same tilled field that his great-grandfather strived.
Came time, consider greater intentions
to building a future and they survived.

Wealth dreams of sunshine, welcome is the rain
upon an endless sea of amber grain.



3/7/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/13/2018 6:31:00 PM
Beautifully descriptive sonnet, Eve. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/13/2018 2:05:00 PM
Eve, amber grain is such an iconic phrase it deserves a beautiful sonnet treatment such as yours. Well penned. Congratulations.
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:20:00 PM
Vivid imagery; beautiful sonnet. Congrats, Eve, on your trophy winner! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:07:00 PM
Such a lovely Sonnet with amazing imagery, Eve. Congratulations on your well-deserved Podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:39:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your top win with this amazing Sonnet, well done !
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:44:00 AM
The comparison of the horse and rider to the sailing ship, I read that an immediately thought, yes! what a great reference. I can see it so perfectly in my mind. you have a beautiful skill of bringing the images to lifelike grace. congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/8/2018 6:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautiful! Well done!
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Date: 7/8/2018 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Eve, on your excellent win for your beautiful sonnet rich in atmospheric imagery. warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/8/2018 1:00:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Eve, nicely written. John
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:46:00 PM
SPLENDID. I always admire your composition. Love.
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Date: 7/8/2018 12:25:00 PM
This is masterful writing Eve, congrats on another top win!
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Date: 3/19/2018 1:04:00 PM
Didn't need to check the contest. THIS is a winner, a lovely work of art. If a picture is worth 1,000 words, your sonnet is worth at least 500---the exact number (of words) that Poetry Soup give us for comments. Why 500? ---Because of remarkable poems like this one. :) gershon
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Date: 3/19/2018 1:42:00 PM
thank you, Gershon, for the inspirational compliment I am honored.. I have no knowledge what scoring soup gives..
Date: 3/15/2018 11:26:00 PM
This is so lovely, Eve! CONGRATS. Janice
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Date: 3/15/2018 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve, on a well deserved win. Vivid imagery here. Great job.
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:36:00 PM
Wonderful imagery in your poem, Eve, and written very well using the required words. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/15/2018 1:09:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your with with a lovely poem.
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Date: 3/14/2018 11:45:00 PM
This sets such a wonderful mood! Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Eve - blessings, and keep up the great work, friend! :-)
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Date: 3/14/2018 9:06:00 PM
Lovely, Eve, has a real sense of place. Congrats! Viv
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Date: 3/14/2018 4:05:00 PM
Back with congrats, Eve. Beautifully done.
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Date: 3/14/2018 1:48:00 PM
This lovely poem should have placed higher in my book, Eve. Congrats on your win:)
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Date: 3/8/2018 7:41:00 PM
Eve, I think you did an outstanding and creative-thinking job with this contest theme. SUre hope to see this on the winners' list!
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Date: 3/8/2018 2:49:00 PM
Excellent (: I love horses I once turned into a cowboy I have a short story on it
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Date: 3/8/2018 8:28:00 AM
An excellent nostalgic depiction of a new generation's sea of amber grain Eve; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Date: 3/8/2018 7:11:00 AM
You've painted a lovely picture, Eve! Janice
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Date: 3/7/2018 10:51:00 PM
Imagery so fresh I could smell and taste each line. Magnificent write! :) gw
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