Sea Food

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                                Captain Black sailed his ship to Bermuda
                                And vanished one day.  Well.. he shoulda'...
                                Sailed a rectangle
                                Instead of triangles
                                Now he's lunch for a starved barracuda!
                                




For Carolyn's "Limerick Sea Tale" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 3:03 AM
I'm laughing at this one again, Carrie. Smiles. Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Pickett Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Haha..... I like this humorous limerick.... Good one.....:JP}
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Great Limerick, Carrie! My congratulations on your win in the contest! And thanks for visiting and leaving your kind comments for me. I truly appreciate, Carrie! Peace, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Sounds like you are familiar with sail boats as well as limericks. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:38 AM
Kool Limerick Carrie, i am delighted for you being placed in Carolyn's fine contest >> James
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 12:06 AM
It’s a fish eat fish world out there! Congratulations Carrie, you swam to the top of the pond with your very cute and funny win in Carolyn Devonshire’s Sea Tale Limerick contest. (Imagine bubbles floating around the following words!) Bask in the fun of the winner’s circle. You deserve it. Big Smiles! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 12:01 AM
Yeah!! YOu made the circle too. You deserved it! LUv,Andrea
Keogh Jr. Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:44 PM
Ah, Miss Carrie, Miss Carrie. I KNEW that I would find YOU in the winners' circle. You are always no less than good. Kudos, my dear, for a deft touch! Regards, Gerard.
Scripca Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Wow! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Sea you!!! Love, Iolanda
Freeman Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 7:03 PM
Cool Carrie, Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:50 PM
LOL something fishie here! Congrad's Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:31 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Limerick contest.. so amusing and funny too... enjoy your wonderful win ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Gorelick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:13 PM
;Your always right up there in the winners circle. Well done! BG
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:12 PM
Carrie, I am absorbed by the triangle lore and loved your poem. Congratulations on your success!
Omaidin Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Great stuff. Very entertaining and witty. Déirdre
Strand Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 1:03 AM
Carrie thank you for your welcome comments & kind words today.Rgds Brian
Foulk Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Loved this poem, as I always enjoy reading your poems. it has been a while since i have been on poetrysoup, hope to stay for awhile.
Moreno Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Great Limerick Carrie and best of luck in the contest...Raul
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us I enjoyed reading it today. Wishing you the best in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Carrie. Love, Carol
Kelly Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 2:44 AM
Clever and witty , Carrie and bet this dish will be at the winners table ....
Strand Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 12:45 AM
Best wishes in the contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & observations today.
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 10:05 PM
Yet another GOOD one. Wow, I feel sorry for Carolyn having to judge this contest, and yep, what you said in your comment to me, you know what they say about great minds!! Luv,Andrea
Delacroix Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 7:52 PM
LOL Oh! WOW! Carrie! How creative and funny this write is. Very original. Should be a winner. Best wishes for the contest. And thanks for your kind comments on mine today. Caroline.
La France Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 4:02 PM
This was so much fun to read, good one for the contest, I bet its a winner... and thanks for your comments on my poetry... Constance
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