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Screen of Awareness

Searching, hastily, determined I shouted: “why!” “why doesn’t the curtain Just rise Allow me to see All of my “self”? He answered: “Be grateful That the veil thins As we are able To bear looking at ourselves” ©5/14/2023 Screen of Awareness Poetry Contest Unseeking Seeker - sponsor

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Lin Lane

Date: 5/14/2023 6:03:00 AM

Some of us could not bear to see ourselves in His eyes. Foolish the man who sees himself righteous instead of lowlier than others. Your poem, written in conversation form makes an impact, John.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/14/2023 5:42:00 AM

Love this. So true. God bless you. Love, Gina

Di11y Da11y

Date: 5/14/2023 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful John, I really like this