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Scents and Senses

On a bed of roses Scents and senses We hold back Our wanting intentions Both in adventure Roaming of hands Sensuous caress Exploratory demands Lips in touch Fencing of tongues Naked flesh in ignite Panting of lungs Fingers conducting Orchestral commands Musical groans Our excitement stands In resonating rhyme As if on an ocean we drift Our pleasure in love Absorbed in this gift Our silk sheets bear witness Graced with red roses Scents and senses captured As our loving closes

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Date: 10/14/2014 8:43:00 AM
like your 4th stanza best.. still still am still on quest on who will I be with scent and scences.. :D loool each paragraoh getting hotter and hotter..
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James Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 4:28:00 PM
The quest is there for many, but I am just like you. For I will live my poems, and see my words come true, James :)
Date: 5/13/2010 12:58:00 PM
James, I hope you typed this on the keyboard with asbestos gloves. The Scots' on fire! I think I remember days like this or should I say nights or when was that? LOL Incendiary work. All the best JT
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:34:00 AM
very passionate, thanks for your comments
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Date: 5/13/2010 3:26:00 AM
Very effective title. enjoyed it
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:52:00 PM
Words of passion from a true romantic! Very nicely written with imagery, rhyme and a melodic quality. It could be lyrics for a love song. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:40:00 PM
Nice, VERY nice!
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