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Scent Of A Rose During Rain

Summertime showers: Passion flows in streams along its petals, Each, like an upturned face, real with tears; In the air, a whiff takes somewhere near. Its sweetness made For holding this wet world— Running down into the soil; Rising up by the storm. All of it soaking through me— (Carry it within) From its smell, I feel the bloom Unfolding, with the subtelty of a kiss.

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Date: 6/25/2023 9:44:00 AM
Very Artistic, poem, Paige. Those last two lines are simply beautiful. Wow! Pangie xx
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Date: 6/24/2023 4:44:00 PM
very nice sensations, a poem that moved me, have a nice week end
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Date: 6/24/2023 2:02:00 PM
The blossoming of a flower, like the gentle caress of a kiss, unveils itself with delicate grace. Truly a magnificent portrayal.
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Date: 6/24/2023 5:53:00 AM
You’ve placed it right in my hand…very nice!
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Date: 6/24/2023 5:11:00 AM
Passion flows in streams along its petals, beautiful poetry, Paige, I enjoyed the read. John
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Date: 6/23/2023 9:22:00 PM
A flower 'unfolding with the subtlety of a kiss' ! Beautiful description, dear Paige
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Date: 6/23/2023 6:31:00 PM
I hope you get a dozen every day for the rest of your life! Beautiful Paige! Best Regards A.S
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Date: 6/23/2023 3:34:00 PM
beautiful, simply beautiful! hugs jan xx
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