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The dry leaves scatter Trying to avoid the wind..... It seems so angry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2011 10:13:00 PM
This looks like it qualifies to be listed as a haiku. Despite missing the "s" on the end of "leave", this is very good.
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:15:00 AM
Some leaves go on endless journeys, but even they eventually settle into the soil of earth to feed anew. Nice shortie Francine >> James :)
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