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hey … I’ll be damned … there’s still some green in there, in these decrepit peepers, and just a flash of gold - gotta look deep, but it’s there … nobody WILL, o‘ course nobody does or cares to … (irony warning) funny … cuz, uh … a surprise-or-two might greet them - a spark - ha! a shimmer, even … yeah, a decidedly visceral darkness, for damn sure, (roots, deep … hidden), but perhaps, on a gem-good day, (though I forgot what those look like), they might even spot a hint … of wisdom … yeah, lol … from ME, on rare occasions - go figure … (tho mined from a shadowy realm, and paid for with agony) … but, man, it just doesn’t reckon anymore, cuz all the depth and color and light and intensity and each blessed bit of goodness, was drained by defeat … defeat and poison - a poison not even worthy of an f-bomb … and it all bled out to oblivion with the dearest, most vital shine of all … hope. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden, November 29, 2022

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Date: 1/23/2023 5:31:00 PM
Your words flowed like water,finding the path of least resistance spilled over me like a water fall and moved me to say this,I see your brilliant light,all is not lost, as something powerful is contained within you.Something true, tempered as steel as you turn to catch the light.On a roll WITH a bag of chips.Wow.
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