Saving Shivers! (Winter of '73)

dang blast that bus!

 I was caught, near on the other side
of town, waiting in the bus shelter, under
the one ceiling heat lamp working....

close to sundown, with the temperature 
dropping quickly, way past zero, and a
full-sideways-blowin' snowstorm 'bout
tippin' over the shelter.... I was startin'
to lose feelin' in my toes, and began
fightin' the shivers..... 

dang blast that bus!

for some reason, I looked into the snow
swept corner, and there all curled up was
an injured squirrel, drawn to the only heat
around, tryin' to hang on!... I had gloves on
so I didn't worry about pickin' the poor thing 
up, and I brought it to a nearby house that
had a light on.....

the kind people who lived there brought me
and my hurt squirrel inside, out of the blizzard!
.....turns out they were 'animal rescue' people!
and offered to nurse my squirrel buddy back
to health.... told me the buses had all been 
cancelled due to the hazardous road conditions,
gave me a ride home and told me my little
squirrel buddy was lucky my bus never came!

(I look back now.... and think 'Guardian Angels' representin' me an' the 
squirrel, were workin' overtime that night, smilin' at the outcome!)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/22/2009 11:05:00 AM
Lovely story, poetry mail!
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:20:00 AM
Excellent write James. I use to have a flying squirrel as a pet until he escaped the cage and made it to one tree. Never saw thew fellow again. Thanks for bringing back a pleasant memory. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win James! As I said before, this is great! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/5/2009 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations James, lovely poem. Pam
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Date: 11/5/2009 5:50:00 AM
I dare say that squirrel thought you were his Guardian Angel. Congratulations, dear James on your win with this very touching poem. Love, Lainie
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Date: 11/5/2009 3:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Let it Snow Contest Jim. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:58:00 PM
Congrats on you success in Constance contest Jim.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:50:00 PM
Creative narrative, James, and congratulations on your placement in the Let It Snow contest... I enjoyed reading this one... keep sharing more on the Soup... I am also honored to be sharing the same stage with u as an honorable mention... Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire' and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart" per HGarvey Daniel Esquire..
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Date: 11/4/2009 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on winning. Nice poem and well deserving.
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Date: 11/4/2009 6:38:00 PM
This was such a creative, and unique entry!! Well deserving to be a winning poem, James! Congratulations on your individual style!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/3/2009 4:55:00 PM
Wowser! The Keeper would be real proud of you! Always the gent even to a squirell BIG hugs. Debbie -Do
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Date: 11/3/2009 4:30:00 PM
You did your good deed for that day and Thank God for late buses...good write....Glad that you enjoyed the ride with Old Bret...great lady just don't mess with her...Thanks Danny
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Date: 11/1/2009 6:04:00 AM
So You..Jim,So kind...lucky squirrel indeed:)sweet write indeed.. i love squirells and all kinds of living creatures,,Jim..-Charma
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Date: 10/31/2009 1:26:00 PM
Isn't it amazing how "Guardian Angels" such as those you describe so eloquently in this heartfelt poem seem to appear just when they are needed. I read the poem James Fraser wrote in tribute to yours and it led me to this work. Outstanding writing, Jim! Much love always, Carolyn
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Date: 10/31/2009 12:03:00 PM
Aaawww.... That's so sweet. I love happy endings. Thank you, Kim
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Date: 10/31/2009 7:00:00 AM
What a wonderful gesture James, wouldn't it be kool to know the squirrels thoughts when you picked him up and helped save him >> awesome piece >> James >> i have written a poem as me being the squirrel - its called " Shivering Squirrel (winter of '73) for James Marshall Goff " >> i hope you don't mind >> James
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Date: 10/29/2009 7:16:00 PM
Oh but I think that you were the guardian angel of that little squirrel. Thanks for the warm fuzzy feeling this story brought to me. Goo luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/28/2009 2:37:00 PM
Stupendous and warm narration! Thumbs up! GOD knows how to deliver. WOW! they were animal rescuers. A lat of rescuing went on there. Goff, I appreciate the visit and comments on my poems.
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Date: 10/27/2009 11:10:00 PM
Wow, Jim, this is a great story! You should make a short story out of this. I would have done the same. Last time I rescued a hedgehog from being overrun by a car. I do love your story....Gert
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Date: 10/27/2009 8:23:00 PM
P.S. Jim, Did you consider entering this story in the Let it Snow... contest? It's a great story. Smiling. Dane
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Date: 10/27/2009 8:21:00 PM
Hi Jim, I really like this story a LOT!!! I think I might just incorporate, "Dang Blast!!!" into my vocabulary to use at frustrating times. SMILING BIG!!! By the way, Thank you very much for the "Fresh Art Fall Tour." information. It sounds very nice. I've been trying to get together with one of my friends at the Artist Guild. But she has been ill. (And she is going blind... very sad...) I'll try again tomorrow. Take care, friend. Love, Dane
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Date: 10/27/2009 7:40:00 PM
Lovely poem James, guardian angels were certainly watching over... Pam.
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Date: 10/27/2009 4:43:00 AM
Living in the south we don't get much snow and really really cold temperatures but the year of 73 we had over two feet of snow. I can somewhat relate to your situation. In the south we are not prepared for the ice, snow, and extreme cold. I love the way that you put this together. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2009 6:00:00 PM
What a coincidence Jim,at the right place at the right time.God's provision for every one. A great story to remember and feel good about.God Bless! Chacko
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Date: 10/26/2009 5:58:00 PM
I seems you experience a double miracle on 34th street James. Smile. Awesome story, gave me the early Christmas spirit. Excellent narrative. Sincerely, Moses
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