Saved For Raven

Her daddy’s grave is the oldest,
His name is hard to read.
She knew his stone had corroded
And has brought supplies she’ll need.

Near to him is her young husband.
He had been the next to die.
She used to come here often
Just to sit by his grave and cry.

Next to her daddy is her mother
After twenty-one years alone 
Her name shows up clearer and newer
On her side of the stone.

As the years went by the lot filled up,
A beloved young nephew is there.
She reads his age of twenty-three
And thinks that it isn’t fair.

The lot started filling faster
With loved brothers and their wives.
She remembers kneeling with her loved son
And speaking with him of their lives.

And now there’s a grave much newer.
She hadn’t thought she would see this one.
His name is there so clear and bright,
The name of her only son.

She looks down to where she is standing
As she feels the cold wind stir. 
RAVEN is chiseled into the rock
At this spot reserved for her.


lBy: Joyce Johnson  shared first place with Linda Marie and Carrie.

For Constance "The Rambling Poet; contest "Among the Dead"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 10:46 AM
wow this is a great poem
Brown Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 11:22 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Joyce. Love, Carol
Frayer Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 12:49 AM
Very nice work! Congrats on your win u greatly deserve it:) Virginia
Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:47 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Yup, you nailed it for Constance! Congrad's Light & Love
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 1:47 PM
OMG Joyce a really fabulous read and a well desevered 1st.place win.~Teresa~
Poet Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 11:21 AM
Wonderful story you have penned here Joyce!Congrats on your 1st place win----kashinath
Conway Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Absolutely amazing Joyce! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~
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February 18, 2011 at 5:54 AM
I told you this was a stand-out work, Joyce. So happy for your first-place wn! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 5:22 AM
a stirring write that's a topper, jiyce! CONGRATS to you!! ;) huggs, nette
Bagnall Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 4:58 AM
I like how nicely you've built the story around the single specified character. Congrats on the first place !
George   Avatar
February 18, 2011 at 12:05 AM
Incredible story Joyce. Congratulations on your WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 8:20 PM
This was a truly well deserved win. many congratulations.
Muzzey Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:48 PM
An extraordinary write! Congratulations on your first place win. I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Richards Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:47 PM
I'm so honored to share this spot with you, Joyce. Well deserved winning this 1st place spot in Constance's contest!! Congratulations
Freeman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Beautiful job Joyce, Cpmngratulations on you first place honor. Agape, Moses
Horsman Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:25 PM
wonderful poem Joyce, a well deserved winner. Harry
Mehta Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Joyce
Pettit Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:10 PM
I had to take a look at the number one winner of this contest. I see why Constance chose this one to be top of the heap. Reading this one reminded me of a nearby memorial park where a good number of my relatives are laid to rest. I just lost a cousin a few weeks ago, and he is now at this park. This is impressive. Congratulations.
Dillard Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 5:03 PM
Number 1 and having fun! Congratulations Joyce. RAY
Haick Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Congratulations on your super Ist Place win in the contest, "Among the Dead", Joyce! Well earned! Love, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:34 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
La France Avatar
February 17, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Congratualtions, Joyce on first place in my contest with this breathtaking poem. Could you send me your address by soup mail so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry~~
Inka Avatar
January 30, 2011 at 10:44 AM
You have great rhyme and flow, and an ability to spark the readers emotion. But damn!!! now Im all sad. lol
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