Get Your Premium Membership

Saved For Raven

Her daddy’s grave is the oldest, His name is hard to read. She knew his stone had corroded And has brought supplies she’ll need. Near to him is her young husband. He had been the next to die. She used to come here often Just to sit by his grave and cry. Next to her daddy is her mother After twenty-one years alone Her name shows up clearer and newer On her side of the stone. As the years went by the lot filled up, A beloved young nephew is there. She reads his age of twenty-three And thinks that it isn’t fair. The lot started filling faster With loved brothers and their wives. She remembers kneeling with her loved son And speaking with him of their lives. And now there’s a grave much newer. She hadn’t thought she would see this one. His name is there so clear and bright, The name of her only son. She looks down to where she is standing As she feels the cold wind stir. RAVEN is chiseled into the rock At this spot reserved for her. lBy: Joyce Johnson shared first place with Linda Marie and Carrie. For Constance "The Rambling Poet; contest "Among the Dead"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 2/25/2011 10:46:00 AM
wow this is a great poem
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2011 11:22:00 AM
I had only read a couple of the poems and wanted so badly to enter but...too many things were going on and didn't get to. I knew Constance would have a time selecting her winners. There is a long list of winners here. You should be so proud of your winning poem congratulations Joyce. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/23/2011 12:49:00 AM
Very nice work! Congrats on your win u greatly deserve it:) Virginia
Login to Reply
Date: 2/19/2011 7:03:00 AM
Many congratulations Joyce on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 2:24:00 PM
Yup, you nailed it for Constance! Congrad's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 1:47:00 PM
OMG Joyce a really fabulous read and a well desevered 1st.place win.~Teresa~
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 11:21:00 AM
Wonderful story you have penned here Joyce!Congrats on your 1st place win----kashinath
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 10:08:00 AM
Absolutely amazing Joyce! Congrats on your well deserved win!~Tirzah~
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 5:54:00 AM
I told you this was a stand-out work, Joyce. So happy for your first-place wn! Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 5:22:00 AM
a stirring write that's a topper, jiyce! CONGRATS to you!! ;) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 4:58:00 AM
I like how nicely you've built the story around the single specified character. Congrats on the first place !
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2011 12:05:00 AM
Incredible story Joyce. Congratulations on your WELL DESERVED FIRST PLACE WIN. Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 8:20:00 PM
This was a truly well deserved win. many congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:48:00 PM
An extraordinary write! Congratulations on your first place win. I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:47:00 PM
I'm so honored to share this spot with you, Joyce. Well deserved winning this 1st place spot in Constance's contest!! Congratulations
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:36:00 PM
Beautiful job Joyce, Cpmngratulations on you first place honor. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:25:00 PM
wonderful poem Joyce, a well deserved winner. Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Joyce
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:10:00 PM
I had to take a look at the number one winner of this contest. I see why Constance chose this one to be top of the heap. Reading this one reminded me of a nearby memorial park where a good number of my relatives are laid to rest. I just lost a cousin a few weeks ago, and he is now at this park. This is impressive. Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 5:03:00 PM
Number 1 and having fun! Congratulations Joyce. RAY
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 4:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your super Ist Place win in the contest, "Among the Dead", Joyce! Well earned! Love, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 4:34:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your first place win in Among the Dead with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/17/2011 4:02:00 PM
Congratualtions, Joyce on first place in my contest with this breathtaking poem. Could you send me your address by soup mail so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry~~
Login to Reply
Date: 1/30/2011 10:44:00 AM
You have great rhyme and flow, and an ability to spark the readers emotion. But damn!!! now Im all sad. lol
Login to Reply
12

Book: Shattered Sighs