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sultry ... summer gloaming daubed with moondrops ... dew of cooling twilight spattered on alabaster skin ... (perfect porcelain) their shimmer, jewels that adorn you ... eventide ... both warm, each waiting breathless and painted wan for a scoundrel such as I to wend its wonders ... (divinely diabolic) the language of passions, proved a dialect warm ... wild not taught or tangible or transgressed ... but known to me from dust-to-dust, innate ... (manic music) body phrases whispered and wound a tender touch, spoken a brush, bewitched and bare your body speaks to me ... (sighing servility) my blood and hands reply ... electro-erotic ...

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Date: 3/2/2021 3:00:00 PM
Most definitely a wondrous piece my friend. Verses and imagery that stirs a poet to embrace deeper thoughts on this world and its many passages travails and human endeavors.. Afav.. God bless...
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Date: 3/1/2021 6:49:00 AM
Passionate winning work. Way to go. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 3/1/2021 6:47:00 AM
Great poem and I like Charlotte’s response. Congrats on your placement. ;0)
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Date: 2/27/2021 7:12:00 PM
You still got it big boy, you even got a thumbs up from Charlotte...that's worth 2 comments at least. Hey did you get my soupmail?
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Date: 2/27/2021 7:52:00 AM
what this poem does to me i can't say publicly! very sensual and erotic; i like the contemporary format and the alliteration
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