Satine

You’ll see a spiral curl upon the brow
And on her cheeks a trailing rose
Beneath the trellis of a smile
Are seeds where sprouts of darkness fell
                          ~
Her honey, wild, and pure with gold
Until the taste was tainted cold
In lonely rooms, pink roses slept
Where bedside shadows used and spent
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The tears she wept so long ago
Now shuttered tight, where secrets hide
Against the dark, against the tide
Of shame which learned to shut an eye
                          ~
How did it come to be this way?
Who stalked her, broke her, made her pay?
A broken childhood, piece by piece
No mercy for what might have been
                          ~
A child, a lily in the bud
Her fear is gone, but not forgot
Redemption, now it matters not
Where true love dwells, is never sought
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A tear upon the lash won’t fall
The garland once upon her dress
Is now tattooed upon her breast
She steals the breath, if once eyes rest
                           ~
Satine,  seductress of wanton depths

                           ~

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Georges Avatar
March 14, 2011 at 1:12 PM
oh well, it just means I have to try that much harder to consider myself a good poet. Well done Carrie, I think this one I'll keep for when I think I've done a good job, so that I can now just how far I have yet to grow. Poetry tells something of ourselves, a tiny morsel we nibble off from our souls, chew and with calloused fingers press into shape upon paper. This shows such a command of emotion...
Pettit Avatar
March 13, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. This is another fabulous presentation. No wonder Constance did not select my entry.
Mehta Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest of Constance, Carrie
Brown Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your Satine winning in Constance's contest "Tell Her Story" Carrie. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 6:36 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Carrie. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 12:26 AM
WOW, Carrie, this is absolutely wonderful. One of my faves in this contest. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Onclaud Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:36 PM
sultry, sultry yet subtle... congrats on the glorious win, carrie! :) huggs, nette
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 9:01 PM
A lovely story and a magnificent win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 8:59 PM
Knew this was awinner the first time I read it. Many congratulations for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 10, 2011 at 5:35 PM
Congrats Carrie on your big win in Tell Her Story contest with this dynamic write my friend. a lovely name as well.. enjoy your wonderful win with luv.. an exciting tale...
La France Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 7:35 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Carrie, I love the name Satine~~
Johnson Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 4:31 PM
You took this and ran with it Carrie. Well done and a winner. I am sure. Love, Joyce
Devonshire Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 9:21 AM
Excellent interpretation of that incredible photo, Carrie. The girl does seem to be smiling, but there also appears to be a sadness in her heart. And she certainly looks seductive. Wishing you success in Constance's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mannan Avatar
March 8, 2011 at 12:52 AM
Wow Carrie. Your words wove a magic here.
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