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Santa's Charm

Life on Santa’s charm He holds the real truth within You’re good, no alarm? Santa holds a great grin Boys and girls look for presents He holds the real truth within He gives kids some mints Candy is their great delight Boys and girls look for presents Hope is here this night Looking for their gifts they want Candy is their great delight In their dreams he’d taunt Seeing all those that were good Looking for their gifts they want Bring some hope, you could Life on Santa’s charm Seeing all those that were good You’re good, no alarm? Better you are Greater the reward Will Santa bring your gifts?
Russell Sivey Entrant into Richard Lamoureux's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser" contest 12/12/2012

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Date: 2/4/2013 6:56:00 AM
'twas a deserving win!! congrats russell :)
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:50:00 AM
Russell, Congratulations, a wonderful win*SKAT
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Date: 1/12/2013 11:17:00 AM
Russell congrats on your win, very well crafted...David
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Date: 1/12/2013 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Russell, I am proud to share it with you xx
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Date: 1/11/2013 9:49:00 PM
Russell.. I'm here to offer support In Richard's "Terzanelle Fantasy with a Questionku Chaser” contest.. :-) CONGRATULATIONS (-: good night~ PD
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:55:00 PM
Congrads on your win Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2013 7:04:00 PM
This was a charming warm piece. Congratulations Russell.
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Date: 12/31/2012 6:07:00 AM
delightful! good job
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Date: 12/13/2012 1:57:00 PM
very much in keeping with holiday spirit Russell luv .. always enjoy your unique blend of words my friend .. have a family emergency out of town so not able to be on woth poetry right now .. hope to return Christmas Eve luv ..
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:56:00 AM
Merry Christmas to you and yours!!!
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Date: 12/13/2012 10:54:00 AM
A superbly rendered TERZANELLE Russ! Not an easy form, but you did it with distinction!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/12/2012 4:43:00 PM
very cute, russell!! so christmasy.
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Date: 12/12/2012 3:14:00 PM
lovely write, my friend - I must try a terzanelle
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Date: 12/12/2012 1:52:00 PM
Russell, this is a delightful poem for the contest, I am working on one also but it will be dark, of course, that's me, but I love this one and best of luck in the contest. Constance
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